Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze: Ninja Journey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Will Naruto and Rin meet the other Jinchuuriki? |
![]() ![]() ![]() IKR? the arc has been really helpful concerning the last xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting but very good story; I especially like what you did with the Sanbi. More Power to you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you type this up in Google Translate? |
![]() ![]() ![]() First off you need a damn good beta for this. It seems that English isn't your first language or you have a very poor command of the English language. Have that beta fix up everything English based and you would get more readers. However, there is potential here, and I'll be watching. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can understand weariness about a jinchuuirki but to treat him with some hostility is stupid. For instance Kushina is not a jinchuuriki anymore but now Naruto is. One once had it but is still the same while one doesn't. I just hope it stays under the radar and that the council is put in place. Danzo can go F himself, eh! Anyway, enough of my rant this story is great and I like how it is turning out, I hope Tsunade enters the picture at some point! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no offense, but your grammar is really bad |
![]() ![]() ![]() get a beta reader, your story has potential but your grammar needs a lot of work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yea pretty sure I use that name |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty sure Kyuumi is the name I created. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story and I'd love to see where it goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where are the quotation marks for the speeches? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Flashback no Jutsu? |