|Reviews for More|
| Update chapter 24 . 9/22/2013
Are you ever gonna update this?
| pinklady34 chapter 24 . 8/6/2013
Oh this is excellent...can't wait for more.
| macfaerie chapter 24 . 8/2/2013
WHERE IS THE NEXT PART! HURRY PLZ!
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/19/2013
Love it so far. Little poke for the next update.
| SunflowerFran chapter 3 . 6/8/2013
Poor Edward ...
| SunflowerFran chapter 2 . 6/8/2013
Let's see what happens now ... Emmett seems like a character!
| ana rod chapter 24 . 5/9/2013
| puasluoma chapter 23 . 5/7/2013
Moré dialogue ;)
| Spunkie09 chapter 23 . 5/3/2013
I would reply more but I barely have time to read a chapter sometimes. lol
I'll read at work while trying to hide it from my boss on my phone...def cant write a review then! LOL
The stories headed in the right direction it feels like. When it is short chapters it can take a while to get where you wanna go. I'm fine with what you are doing...you can't have a lemon every chapter that means no story in my opinion anyway :)
I think you should keep doing what you're doing.
| jkp13452 chapter 23 . 5/2/2013
More lemons! I love the lemons! Maybe evens little backstory!
| xxdawnbreakerxx chapter 23 . 5/2/2013
I'd like more of both but great chap;)
| Spunkie09 chapter 19 . 4/30/2013
Yay...they're back! LOL Glad you are too
| maymay74 chapter 18 . 4/24/2013
Go, enjoy yourselve in Vegas hun
| maymay74 chapter 17 . 4/24/2013
He should've stay, but he's new to this business, relationship or whatever this is
| maymay74 chapter 16 . 4/24/2013
Now he knows it's a question of practice and patience