Reviews for As Embers Dress the Sky
HarryPotterGrl100 chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
:) Sigh...if only she'd ended it with these two. :( EXCELLENT WORK!
Shani8 chapter 1 . 8/13/2015
Very nice for your first story. I greatly enjoyed this, and thank you for taking the time to write and share with the rest of us.

Well done!

-Shani :)
serenityselena chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
touching story... they deserve their happy ending :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Finally a happy ending for everyone... Well except for Ron
phoenixgirl26 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Wow, the way you wrote was incredible, how you described everything, it pulled me into the story. I hope you write more, so even though this was a short story, it was brilliant, thank you for sharing.
blakekeane chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Nice story! Should have some more dialogue though.
badkidoh chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I liked this story.
digitalwitch18 chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Forgive me typing this on my phone so will be short. Your first story? Can only say WOW! Was lovely really lovely. Hope you write more!
Smithback chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Bemily Q chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
I liked the story. I liked the imagery that your wording evoked. It was a sweet story.
Nice Critic chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Not bad. Just a couple of things. Make your dialogue a little more natural. Try reading a bunch more fanfictions to get a feel for the dialogue. Second, your paragraphs are a bit too long. They're about three times as long as a usual paragraph. Nice job though.

MJT chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Good story! The plot, admittedly, is not very original, but you write it very well. I especially enjoyed your description of Hogwarts after the battle - enjoyably eclectic words, and they read beautiful instead of poncy, which is rare in fanfiction. Looking forward to more.
Anotherboarduser chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Good story, I look forward to reading more.