|Reviews for and after this our exile|
| lavender spring chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
Finally got around to reading the second chapter : )
I love where this is going!
Please update soon!
Your writing is really good too, so don't worry! I really like the dialogue between L and Light, they keep up with each other really well, and I love reading into their sentences.
| lavender spring chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
You are an amazing writer!
I didn't feel like I was reading a fan fiction but a real Death Note novel! Please write lot's more! I loved the descriptions of L and Light's minds too, and the dreams...!
Just... wow! : )
| SoShi Love x3 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Woah... Love how you write. I mean, I felt like I was having those dreams, could feel the boredom after a dream ended, feel the silent not-quite-awkwardness between them. You are extremely good at sharing emotions, thoughts. And to put icing on the cake, there were no spelling or grammar mistakes that I noticed. Are you going to add more to this? I feel it can stand alone or continue on.
| Kkoyuki chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Seems like it may spark a rather interesting plot:) Keep writing.