|Reviews for Forgoing the Inevitable|
| Cayar chapter 41 . 3/6
While entertaining, this story has become somewhat aimless, in that there is not a clear purpose for many of the characters.
| Guest chapter 41 . 3/2
Why are you turning Shepard into a massive dick that's cheating on the woman he loves? I'm so confused about where you're going with this story.
| SpeedyTheMouse chapter 41 . 3/4
Just when you think everything is finally working out... Well played. I already had my suspicions when the shuttles from Horizon were metioned though. ;) You better release the next chapter quickly! Anyway keep up the great work, can't wait to read where this is going!
| Hewhoislost chapter 41 . 3/3
Loved the chapter. I feel bad for Liara thou, shocked that Shepard would do that as well.
| bluemarlin chapter 41 . 3/3
Excellent chapter. I see the Shepard clone is already spreading hate and discontent. Wonder how long till the deception is discovered. Looking forward to more.
| Mal Cobb chapter 40 . 3/3
Well done with the revision of Henry Lawson’s story and carrying him on as a new central villain.
I found your portrayal of the Miranda clones chilling and sad—very nice detail there. As always, a polished and engaging chapter. Cheers!
| Anon chapter 41 . 2/28
Um, okay, the parts between Shepard and Liara... some kind of trick, maybe? Like trying to fool us readers?
Cos if otherwise,
RAAGGGEEEEE! Not cool bro. Can't believe you made Shepard cheat with Liara or anybody. If that's the route you're going for in this story, I vote for breaking Miranda and Shepard up.
Miranda doesn't deserve to be treated like that and Shepard most definitely doesn't deserve her. What the hell happened with Shepard being "a better man" for her as Jacob said?
| WardenCommanderRevan chapter 41 . 3/2
Thank god I read the reviews, I was freaking out that you changed the awesome Shepard character you created. I so completely forgot about the last chapter. Well done, yet again.
| OrpheusDeTelos chapter 1 . 3/1
WAIT WAIT, WHAT?! HOW CAN SHEP- ohh... I see what's going on, well played good sir, well played!
So looking forward to the next chapter! It's gonna get wild!
| NeonZangetsu chapter 41 . 3/1
OHHHHHH THAT DAMN CLONE! HE'S GONNA FUCK THINGS UP! I WANNA STRANGLE HIIIIIIM! On another note, I really enjoyed this chapter, lovely to see an update from you so soon. I'm not looking forward to the chaose that this-and by definition Henry-will be causing, but that's just my way. I know you have a plan, one you'll follow thru till the end and I loook forward to seeing it...and hoping it ends in a very, very, VERY brutal death for one Henry Lawson.
| KhazintheDark chapter 41 . 3/1
Ok, is there another Shepard clone running around or what? I'll tell you how I came to this conclusion: the USB, Glyph answering Liara like he answered Shepard, the little details, which on their own indicate an affair but together form something larger.
| CN7 chapter 41 . 3/1
It's that goddamn clone, isn't it!? The one Henry Lawson created!? That's terrible. The REAL Shepard would never do that to Miranda or Liara, right!? Right? Because the real on is in Miri's office, snuggling up to her as she works! He couldn't be the jerk on Virmire who suddenly accused Miranda of being a source of problems, reverting to callousness, and of the sterility she had no control oved! They were totally fine in her office. No eay that's the real deal. I wanted to punch him in the throat!
| AndrewLucas chapter 41 . 3/1
This chapter made me very confused,i can't see Shepard doing what he is doing to Miranda after all they have been trough, that line of Miranda sterility its just... Ugh, Shepard in this chapter is totally a jerk, Look your fic is awesome but this chapter i hated so much that i don't know if i'm going read it back.
Lets see what happens.
| Suqu124 chapter 41 . 3/1
haha love the twists and turns you bring to the story. Shepard/Liara is one of my fave pairings and i wonder where you will go with this. i also enjoy Shep/Miri but the Commander connects to everyone very closely. looking forward to next chapter
| Springbox chapter 41 . 3/1
Dammit, I almost spilled my tea reading the end of this chapter! Here I was just up from a good night out nursing a cup of tea and saw your update and began reading only to have a major wtf moment so early in the morning - shame on you lol. Seriously though if this is going the way I think it is then I'm really looking forward to it and well done but please don't let it be a triangle affair (pun intended).