|Reviews for Sea Shanies|
| Freefan1412 chapter 10 . 1/1
Nice new chapter. That is to say it is well written and has insight into a not very much explored character. Well done in that regard...
but da** I hate the b******.
This chapter is illuminating from his point of view, it doesn't make me despise him any less.
I'm sure I'm not the only one, though...
Good work and I'm looking forward to more.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 9 . 12/30/2013
nice perspective on this hell of an issue. especially from Kuzan. seriously though, he was like the last chance for the amrines to have any GOOD as a group and have any CLIAMS of decent morality now. Smokers too small on the food change authority, politically and freaking militarily...
ah well the Marines are going to break, and its going to be bloody...
but tragedy! should be interesting to see its fall.
nice look into the icey man.
| Freefan1412 chapter 7 . 11/29/2013
Nice one. The thought that Vivi could have been one of those Tenryubitos was a surprising revelation. You addressed that issue here and reflected a bit more on what it meant that she wasn't one. And implications of that. I haven't actually thought about it as deeply as you have here, but the aftermath of one little choice was heavy.
| Freefan1412 chapter 6 . 8/9/2013
This is a very well done description of what being a slave was like. I mean everyone knows what being a slave means, but just the term is not enough to show the horror of it. So, well done.
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
-bites lip- I haven't seen the Fish Man Island arc... but this just makes me want to hug her. Update soon!
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
You know what I just realized? Nojiko is the only sister ever mentioned in the series to any of the Strawhats. Everyone else had either brothers or rivals. Nami's my favorite female character of One Piece, she really is. Update soon!
| NeonZangetsu chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
Daaaaaaw! I loved this! So refreshing to see a new take on Nami and Nojiko's sisterly love...
| person chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
This is beautiful. Really, really beautiful.
Sabo and his dad... Celestial Dragons having a better relationship really is sad.
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
-claps- Nicely done. I didn't think there were so many father figures in One Piece. The one with Ace and Marco causing everyone to fight made me laugh. It reminded me of that one scene in Mulan, where she's just going to the training camp and accidentally starts that whole fight and everyone blames her. XD Update soon!
| NeonZangetsu chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Daaaaaaw! I so totally loved this! A Happy Father's Day to you as well!
| Freefan1412 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Nice. :) These snippets are all over the place, but the inside look is interesting. Keep up the good work.
| scratchienails chapter 3 . 5/12/2013
Aww, fuck, I'm crying. Every single section is beautiful, and does such a great job portraying the differences and similarities between the mothers. Amazing work. Each character is so well represented too!
| person chapter 3 . 5/11/2013
d'awww, this is just so cute and lovely.
| person chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
Awww, so sweet :3
| person chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
There's finally a deeper meaning to Sogeking :D
I'm looking forward to more ;)