Your OC character, huh?
In fact it's just Totomaru that you change his name and character. And Totomaru is the weakest of the element four.

I hope Naruto feels something's good in him. Keep it going :D

Thats so awesome story i ever have read! I hope you plan to update new chapter soon!

great story but why does every naruto sasuke syory have sasuke being extremely stronger than naruto..its kinda cliche

Nice

hope to read more.

Great and interesting, but Sasuke destroyed the story for me,i don't know why, it just does. Not hatin' or anything , just sayin'.

You have to update this story its just awsome can't wait to see if you update this story or not.

looking forward to the next chapter

I don't know if you gave up but don't I love the story. Keep up the good work.

So far everything is looking good, there are a few little hiccups here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed with a good beta. I'm actually really curious on what you plan on doing down the road what with Phantom Lord getting disbanded, or if you even plan on them fighting Fairy Tail and have something else in mind. In any case I'll be on the lookout for your story.

Interesting story!
I just hope you don't plan doing a harem based paring for Naruto...
I can see he either becomes unstable again after this chapter.
I look forward for the next update! :)

That was motherfucking awesome

Hn..
continue

Great chapter