Reviews for Maelstrom of Chaos |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Like this chapter and felt the battle with Gajeel was cool. I'm looking forward to the fallout of Honomaru's death. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey this story is great so please update soon |
![]() ![]() supert history |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice OC. but not a Xover. him liking ramen is not enough and he never ate it in your story. the story is good. i like it. but it is not a crossover |
![]() ![]() ![]() by oc you mean naruto? because so far you made a powerful OC with a name naruto. That is not a sufficient base for crossover |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job on the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad. Update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good chapter, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the story, hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All around cool chapter I like the beginning battle with Honomaru and the little foreshadowing with Jose. The end with Juvia was cool and looking forward to the battle with Gajeel and hope to see more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter, I loved the fight between Naruto and his sensei. The interaction with Juvia was excellently written as well. Can't wait to see the next chapter when he fights who I assume is Gajeel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start to the story. I love the idea of Naruto being a chaos god slayer. Can't wait for chapter 2. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, but i would be disappointed if this is a story where naruto gets all sappy and all about friendship and family. I think it would be bad for him to join fairy tail and be shaped to what they and the gods want him to be. He should be what he wants to be. If you make him with such a past, his attitude should be unlike any of the fairy tail mages but not against them. |
![]() ![]() boring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing Start :) |