Reviews for Maelstrom of Chaos
dr mantis toboggan chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Really interesting. Normally I dont like it when naruto use slayer magic but you made him have a cool element to use and i am really curious about what chaos can do. Is it a energy base attack that is very unstable that explodes one impact or is some thing else. Anyway the story is cool and i cant wait for the next chapter.
T00STr00nG chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
seems interesting! Hopefully its not a harem. I'm curious about the next chapter so update soon please!
5inches chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Good start, you just do Naru x account? Or Harem?
Otherwise I think you made a good choice when you have decided that Naruto did not rejoindrais Fairy Tail directly.
The DarkEnd Dragon chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
You did an amazing job on this chapter i am already engrossed in this story, Make more, If Naruto is gonna be with a girl how about Ikaruga, since there aren't that many fan fics about her and Naruto.
Question Is Naruto a Demi-God Son of Chaos himself and a mortal women, if so is his mother Kushina Uzumaki

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Mzr90 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
This is interesting I did see a grammar mistake or two but cool chapter and too early to say about your OC normally I'm not fans of them.

Anyway I'm looking forward to more and know its too early to say but I hope you use a rarely used pairing like Lucy since its always Erza or Mira.
DragonOfApocalypse chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
It's pretty good!
I like it! :D
Thanks for the chap!
I can't wait 4 more!
Can Erza and Mirajane be with Naruto?
Or only Erza? :D
Have a nice day!
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