Reviews for Mokoumon
Belgarion chapter 3 . 10/2/2014
May I ask for a continuation ? It may be far to be the fiction of the year but your writing is fairly good and readable, even if it miss some "punch", maybe it seems to academical. The idea is good, Mokou taken by a team Rocket member is more interesting than rejoining Ash, and even if the three first chapter are slow, all those things make it promising.
I Before A Except After K chapter 3 . 6/14/2013
Mokou vs Officer Jenny? All of my cringe. All of it. That's the most cringe-worthy thing I've ever read in my entire life. I mean, the rest of the story was kinda cringe-worthy, but god damn that last part made me cringe.