Reviews for Undercovers
OurSongSweetcheeks chapter 4 . 5/4/2013
great chapter :D update soon :)
Sweetest-Time chapter 4 . 5/3/2013
This is really good!I think that ray should be about to push her so tony shoots him...
starkiller2886 chapter 4 . 5/3/2013
gibbs shoots him
Miss Suave chapter 4 . 5/3/2013
Awwwww dang. Its about to get real. Like, REALLY REAL! I WISH RAY WOULD PUSH ZIVA DOWN THE STAIRS! He is going to DIE! :P update soon! :)
poodlelomein35 chapter 4 . 5/3/2013
Guest chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
I really hope they get her back! Urgh I hate Ray, his face is stupid :P
Loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter _
Aliyah-Shalom-David34 chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
Update soon please!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
good start continue youre doing great
Miss Suave chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
MIAMIIIIIIIII! AYEEEEEEEE! Lol. I wanna go to Miami, not to be kidnapped by somebody crazy, and pregnant. But, Miami sounds nice right about now. Oh, just wondering, how did Ziva get through the airport, but she was knocked out for 4 hours? Did Ray have a Private plane? Anywho, update soon!
The Needless Lobsters chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
Thank you X3
AJ xxx
DS2010 chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
Hope either Ziva or Tony punches dear old CIA-ray
blueberry55 chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
Great chapter , hopefully Ray doesn't find out she's pregnant a d further his dilusion about being with Ziva or hurt her to hurt the baby. Stress is very bad for a fetus hope Ziva can stay calm, her training should really help her nerves.
LostGirlInTheForest chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
Love it update soon please. I can't believe you brought ray into it, I would of never expected it to be him.
Sweetest-Time chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
This story is really good I can't wait for the next chapter! I think that ray should find out that ziva is pregnant
prince-bishop chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
Well done a good chapter
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