|Reviews for the story of a faun|
| Marmy chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
I couldn't get past that first sentence. Did you even try to use correct grammar?
| Roztov chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
Quiet relaxing to read, the fact that it is not your native language actually gives it an other-worldly quality I think.
Smaller paragraphs would make it less dense and remember to give pronouns capitals :)
| Roztov chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
Your english is much better in this :)
Is this set in Faerune?
| Roztov chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
I can tell English is not your first language, but your use of grammar does give it a certain charm :)