Reviews for Unexpected Romance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I primarily like this story because it stays true to its title. It is an unexpected romance. AzulaxAang is just not done alot and when me and I am sure others find a good story (your story is awesome btw) with a pairing not often used we want more. I love this story and am now addicted to Aang x Azula. I really want to finish this but if you work on other stories I understand. I will just have to find and make you now get back to work and don't ever think about quitting on me. You got it? I said u got it? That last part was a joke. Or was it? Seriously though I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great a story. I love the twist that you've done. It's getting really interesting now that they have captured her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() at first I thought like, wait, unexpected romance finally got an update?! but the author is supposed to be dead since there hasn't been an update for a while(long while). and honestly speaking I maybe have forgotten the storyline but not the title cause the title of this story IS rather uncommon. and cartwheel fanatic? i... can't think of anyone... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love azula x aang please do not change the peering. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its unexpected. That's why I love this story to much, one always calm and collected for the most part, the other childish and happy all the time. It some how works. This and one other story is why I ship this pairing as much as I do. Please continue with the story and hopefully we get a story update soon. :) best of luck. |
![]() ![]() I like this chapter! Is this story done? |
![]() ![]() Good stuff. It appears to have died. Terribly sad. I love Azulaang. Update if you still care to |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job on the story let's keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cool story, hopefully you solve your writer's block problem |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am enthralled by this story! love the darkness that others wont even touch! hope you keep writing it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise must read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter, I think you got the characters just right. The Dialogue was good too. One thing I have to say is sometimes you start sentences with different people, and I had no idea what they were talking about because it was in the middle of the conversation. For instance: '...on the two imbeciles taking them to a "disclosed" location.' "So who is this friend of yours?"' I had to reread it to figure it out. It doesn't ruin the story, but I think if you would've started the conversation it would've been a little bit better. Still a great story. Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awkward Zuko is always so much fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it i want to no what Ty lee has |
![]() ![]() Please make more so awesome :) |