Reviews for The Weakest Part
FenZev chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Yikes. I think Fenris' was the worst, and yet the most likely. Good stuff.
Seras Nova chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Interesting view point here! I think you have it right-they not only wouldn't have come together if it wasn't for Hawke, but they depended on her so heavily that their lives were broken. I question whether it would have gone to these extremes, but it fits the theme of your story.

Nice work! Keep writing!

-Seras
KrystylSky chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Oh wow that was angsty made me cry and had an element of truth
Violet Enigma chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
very moving, very sad but very, very well written.
Apollo Wings chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Very dark. Loved every moment xxx