Reviews for A wizard s trial
JennieLK chapter 14 . 8/17
I'm really enjoying this story - looking forward to your next update.
misundersnape chapter 14 . 8/11
Hermione is both distraction and irritant in his life right now... it's incredible that he's not thinking more negatively about her. But it all boils down to that last sentence anyway, no matter Hermione's feelings for him, he's certainly not genuinely feeling anything remotely similar yet.

Great story so far... it's keeping me on my toes, that's for sure.

Will look for more if/when you update. :)

misundersnape chapter 13 . 8/11
Love Severus' inner musings. "Well, write to the Prophet. Severus Snape is human, after all." LOL!

And Hermione has a ... nightmare?

Of course it would be something like that - we need Snape to start comforting her, after all, he can't just BE comforted. Damn immature swat of a girl.

He needs a woman - I'm telling you - not a girl!

Alright... let's see what the drama is...

misundersnape chapter 12 . 8/11
He was unexpectedly accommodating in the end there... hmmm...

misundersnape chapter 11 . 8/11
Hahaha... even Dobby and the castle seems to think Hermione is suitable for Severus. I must be wrong. ;)

misundersnape chapter 10 . 8/11
Er... well that's a creative way you think the RoR works.

Safe? Hmmm... not so sure about that. Do you think he'll be pleased to see Hermione there, dressed in some of his discarded clothes? I wouldn't have thought so... but let's see...

misundersnape chapter 9 . 8/11
Yep... praise and adulation from one man is what she wanted... not points. I personally think the points would have been the more appropriate reward for her to desire and accept.

Snape knew what was coming... he spared himself the scrutiny too. Highly inappropriate and mortifying for the both of them, I must say. Best to forget that ever happened.

Alrighty... what's next?
misundersnape chapter 8 . 8/11
Ah... oh... this is all a bit awkward. Is all this revising entirely necessary - I mean, it's working well to break the ice and build bridges between Severus and Hermione, sure... but what's the point of it other than that?

Seems Hermione is fishing for compliments and dearly wishing for Snape's approval... but this is an exceptionally narcissistic way to gain those things. Ew. Hermione needs to eat some humble pie, me thinks.

misundersnape chapter 7 . 8/10
Chilling for Severus to have to relive this... and so soon. I can only imagine he's focused on recalling the pain... and now that inevitable humiliation of discovering he'd been observed in this condition and now again with three more witnesses. Pretty mortifying, I reckon.

Hermione made a good decision to deliberately not look this time - although I don't believe she'll ever legitimately win him over, this is the kind of behaviour (maturity) that would do it if it were possible.

misundersnape chapter 6 . 8/10
The child that wishes she was an adult because she's gone and developed a bit of a crush on our dear Professor Snape. Well, who can blame her... but how could he ever see her as more than a child? He's complex... he's mature... he's controlled, very tightly... very driven and on a very strict pathway of existence, otherwise he would have topped himself many years ago. His mission is purely revenge... it would take quite a woman to distract him from that goal... and Hermione is but a child, especially to him. :(

Let's see then...
misundersnape chapter 5 . 8/10
Ah... good, the verbal ripping to pieces - she deserved every moment of it, the silly little swat!


misundersnape chapter 4 . 8/10
Interesting... and a nekked Hermione... hmmm...

My only critique - I don't think this heroine is actually Hermione - she's too young for this kind of competence and maturity (although I do say that while recognising the inherent stupidity she's engaged in too)... but nevertheless, let's run with it.

misundersnape chapter 3 . 8/10
Urgh... Griffindor stupidity!

Sev... wake up and save the day, why don't you!? Bellatrix is expecting it, at least.

I hope when he's done, and before they get to hot sex, he at least verbally rips Hermione to pieces for her pitiable prudence.

See... she's not the girl for him, I swear.

misundersnape chapter 2 . 8/10
Haha... I have no idea what Snape was trying to say. I haven't cheated yet... but I will.

Stretching my imagination a little with the sexual innuendo and feelings of attraction in such a dire circumstance... but hey, it's fanfiction... let's run with it.

Good job, it's still interesting.

misundersnape chapter 1 . 8/10
I love reviews myself, and like to check out other writer's work, especially when they've gifted me with a review! :) So here is your reward.

This is a fantastic start - I love all Hermione's musings... she's spot on regarding Snape's character, his use of his dark, impenetrable facade. I'm not sure Hermione is the best character to break though it and 'get to know the real him', but you've set up a plausible plot as a catalyst nonetheless. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

I note that English is not your first language, and therefore I think your work here is great, but as a native speaker I can tell... sometimes the sentences are a little off... sometimes a different word would be better to use... but as a whole I am impressed. A beta would solve all these issues easily... your intentions are very clear regardless of the small language fails dotted here and there.

Your opening line and the next paragraph hooked me - I love them - very well done! "If it isn't him, at least." Hahaha... yep, indeed!
Moving on to the next chappie!
(Oh... and I have another fic of mine to recommend to you, if you're interested - I think you'll like this one too. Let me know in a reply and I'll let you know which one) :)
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