Reviews for O'Neill's Baby
JoySingWritePoemeLive chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
Loved the story.

Finally everything will end with a happy ending!

great writing!
whiteKnight15 chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Love IT! Please continue the story!
celticas chapter 5 . 6/17/2007
really good although they were abit out of character there at the end. and just one question what does Juc peese mean?
Dragoon Galaxy chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
You'll know if I like this when I leave another review.
Aligewe chapter 5 . 3/27/2005
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!This is great. I only thought that Jack proposing was a little fast especially after him being gone for 2 years

Aligewe
GateSeeker2 chapter 2 . 1/18/2004
Why would Jack have ever willingly vacationed on Edora?
Wouldn't he have felt uncomfortable with being with Laira again?
Not to mention, the hurt it might cause Sam?
Plus, why would the General let Jack spend 3 months vacation, and off world to boot!
Overall, the setup for the story doesn't seem viable, but I'll keep reading anyway.
movielover03 chapter 5 . 4/23/2003
keep going. This is a good story. Check your spelling and grammar mistakes if makes it easier to read.
The Lady Reaper of the Shadows chapter 5 . 10/27/2002
this is good too another part please!
sandjgirl chapter 5 . 10/24/2002
Loved it, so cool! but dang girl, that marty line was just too cruel. you have a dark side dont ya. :))) I love your writing, and your ideas!
Moon Fox chapter 5 . 10/5/2002
*sniffle* how sweet!
randomthing chapter 5 . 9/4/2002
AW! I love Jack and kids-it's two things that just go together so well, and I love this story. A very good premise adn YAY for getting Sam and Jack together as a family D
MentalSarcasm chapter 5 . 9/2/2002
Aww, that's so sweet!
Cosmic Fool chapter 5 . 8/31/2002
Please continue. This is such an awesome story.
Gater101 chapter 5 . 8/31/2002
Oh you have to continue! You just have to. That was great! Loved it. :)
colombe.de.pluie chapter 5 . 8/31/2002
it was cool ! I love ur story.
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