Reviews for Monster of Ember Island
trollkingNO.1 chapter 5 . 6/2
dude how could you stop this was just the first 4 pages now I'm bummed
Cha0s4ever chapter 5 . 2/26
Great story. Hope you or someone continues it someday.
Jebest4781 chapter 4 . 1/5
This seems good on the developments here
Jebest4781 chapter 3 . 1/5
Things are getting interesting
Jebest4781 chapter 2 . 1/5
Things are going to get more interesting soon enough
Jebest4781 chapter 1 . 1/5
Well this could be interesting to read here
kira444 chapter 5 . 1/4
adoption aka death by fanfiction. Have fun getting someone to continue it.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/31/2015
This is a wonderful story
phantom frost chapter 2 . 1/2
Man if i was naruto i would hate ty lee and would probably tell her that
Banjo the Fox chapter 2 . 1/1
Ugh, fucking pricks, all of them. Ty Lee especially is the biggest bitch.
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 1/1
Fantastic first chapter, though I was hoping Naruto to be overly powerful and terrifying...
The Swordslinger chapter 2 . 10/3/2015
Ok, I finally got time to read this after a long and very busy period of my life.

Interactions seem fine, but I have to put into question Naruto's character. On the previous chapter he wanted to be alone, was afraid of many and was bullied by that guy trying to get in Ty Lee's panties. Here... Naruto smiles to Zuko and helps him up.

I'm a bit confused with the whole character development here, but I hope future chapters clear that out.
The Swordslinger chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Well, a pretty solid intro with some of the canon Naruto plot points taken up to eleven. I won't deny that having Naruto kicked when he's down feels cheap, but when someone knows what they're doing it truly shows.
jangoman1579 chapter 2 . 5/22/2015
The fuck is this why did Naruto get captured so easily
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 4/17/2015
Awesome story continue please.
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