Reviews for A Second Hope
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 26 . 6/27
I really like it a lot! **
silentmayhem chapter 26 . 6/27
Harry will have a friend from his world...please let it be Neville or Luna.
Love this story and I missed your updates
DarkRavie chapter 26 . 6/27
I really love this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Blueowl chapter 26 . 6/27
Glad to see an update. It was quite adorable _
Hope you're feeling better and won't have to revisit the hospital any time soon.
Looking forward for more.
KyuubiChild717 chapter 26 . 6/27
Thanks for the chapter. Feel better soon
Anne Riddle 1 chapter 26 . 6/27
I'm always so amazed at the rhymes you come up with! I'm glad he's safe.
AroVolturi chapter 26 . 6/27
Feel better! I'm also out of commission on pain killers. Wisdom teeth .
hentai18ancilla chapter 26 . 6/27
Interesting...Death is his constant and companion
briarleaves chapter 26 . 6/27
Awesome! I'm so happy your getting better! And I loved the chapter!
VERA VIV chapter 25 . 6/21
Oh! This is becoming very exciting! Can't wait for your next update!
zuppercat chapter 25 . 6/19
Omg I love this so much! Looking forward to the dwarves meeting Ellas! :)
HappyPenguin chapter 25 . 6/12
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'm dying from suspense. Love this fanfic
jupimako chapter 25 . 6/12
Your story is great! I hope you update again soon.
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 7 . 6/8
*glances around in paranoia* *clears throat* Heyo, there. I'm just giving you some random reviews as I read through this. I love the story, and I hope you continue writing more and more while enjoying it as well.
The only thing I have to comment on is that some sentences might make more sense, and be read more smoothly if you used more commas. Like, for an example: glancing around, the gnome found a potato. See the placing there? ;)
Use commas to separate independent clauses when they are joined by any of these seven coordinating conjunctions: and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet. 2. Use commas after introductory a) clauses, b) phrases, or c) words that come before the main clause. (This was copied and pasted from a site).
Try to see how commas are used in published books, and that will help a lot. ;)
Good luck!
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 3 . 6/7
Come and get your love~ I said find it, find it~ I'll love you if you like it~ come and get your love~come and get your love, now~ What's the matter if you feel right~ lalalalalala~

That is in response to your AN asking for love. There, now you have some. ;) And this story is great. Made me cry, actually. But that's good. Some little grammar issues but other than that I really love this story.
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