Reviews for A Second Hope
AnimeBook's chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
This is a good story. Two the Elves I suppose Harry seems a little defiant, since Harry's stubborn personality and not wanting to be treated like a child is showing through. Which I suppose to the elves they see this behavior as a byproduct of his time as a captive a monk's his captors, and since it seems like none of the Elves can't decide where it would be best for Harry to live since they all want Hary to live with them in their area, maybe you should do something like have them all come together in one central location that they think would make Harry more comfortable. And question, is this set before or after the ring?
Kai19 chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Nice to see a new chapter! Hm... I wonder if they should ask Harry where he wants to go? I'm guessing he still thinks he's in danger, which is a little much, considering they've been nothing but nice to him, even after he bit them and such. Anyway, maybe someone should ask why he keeps trying to leave?

Hope to read more soon!
AceZ-Shadow chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
IT'S AN UPDATE, LET'S CELEBRATE! Stuborn Harry is fine, a bit more details on that area will help improve the story. As for ideas, I don't know. I mean, it's your story so I suggest that you let your instinct guide you. Just don't let the elves fight among themself. I don't think thats in their nature, w/ other race, yes but w/ each other, no.
Zaidee Lighthart chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Hahaha. Harry sounds so cute. I wonder when he will find out that he is an elf like them? XD
ISeeaD.light chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
We, Harry is awake! Now lets see the the old ladies fighting to be the one who will take him in. Kkkkk
Hesperis chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Poor Harry. For him it must be like in the prison. If he would go to Mirkwood, maybe Estel could go with him and Legolas? - They both have the same course, to the north.
...I assume that it is happening after the conquer of Erebor. Maybe you can thrust some dwarfs in to the mix? :-)
I'm looking forward the next chapter!
Canta009 chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Hope you continue this, loved it so far
Miss Eliza Lupin chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Just please leave him in Imladris, it would be best I think. Plus think of all the pranks and adventures that could happen with Harry the twins and Estel. It would be fun.

Eliza
Zlatka chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Thank you for new chapter :))
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 11 . 10/12/2013
I like it!
Aewnaur chapter 11 . 10/12/2013
too cute .. i love all the elfling harry fics! i love them when he is whiny and when he is badass and.. lol there can never be enough elfling harry fics in the world! please keep up the good work .. i love seeing harry make everyone work for it and fight over him lol.. thank you!
Yana5 chapter 11 . 10/12/2013
Well you should tell Harry that, Elrond. Loved it. Thank you for the update
StValentineSt chapter 11 . 10/12/2013
Ohh, Harry is awake XD Poor elves, it seems like he is a handful lol I like the way Harry sees the situation and dislikes being cuddled. He has gone through so much, after all, of course he isn't used to being treated like a child should. It was fun to read about his escape attempts. Too bad he failed. I would have loved to see some elves running around in panic, mwahaha XD I'm not sure about his relocation, though. I bet everyone wants Harry to live with them but I hope there's plenty of more chapters with Haldir and Legolas and the twin brothers. I like Harry being surrounded by all of them lol Couldn't really choose one of them right now. XD Anyways, great chapter, hope the next update is quick ;)
DarkRavie chapter 11 . 10/12/2013
Great chapter. I like this story and look forward to reading what happens next.
AmethystSiri chapter 11 . 10/12/2013
Cute Harry :))))
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