Reviews for Fallen Ashes
Aka-Baka Hoshi chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Awww, poor Sasuke! I know! Really, Kishimoto? Did Neji REALLY have to die?
Jezzika of Medius chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
I really liked your rendition of Sasuke's reaction. It was very real and quick possible. Sometimes that's how I feel about myself.
BrothersForever chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
That was so beautiful!
Darth-Taisha chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Excellent writing and very introspective. I have to agree with you about Sasuke's initial reaction after Itachi's second death, I thought it was missing something or lacking (for use of a better word). Later chapters in the manga explained his reaction somewhat but I still didn't think it was handled well by Kishimoto. I hope your life has improved and you and your children are doing well. Keep on writing, because you have a lot of talent.