Reviews for Straitlaced
SCE2AUX chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
Jo's a Naval Lt. Commander, not a Marine - though the Marine Corps is part of the Department of the Navy.
ToxThexMoonxAndxBack chapter 20 . 6/22/2015
I think this is the second time I've read this all the way through. Just wanted to comment saying that I really like this story. Xxx
Justice237 chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
A great story and an even better way to cap it off, my friend! I really want to find out what happened to Jo and Laurie's mom! I really love Laurie herself, she seems like a great character. But I love this story and I look forward to the sequel!

Justice237 chapter 17 . 11/28/2014
God, I really hate Jo's father. But I still love our two main characters as much as they love each other. Keep going, I want to see them finish off Jessup!
Justice237 chapter 16 . 11/27/2014
Holy moly.

I know that this was my idea but holy cow, the way you write it just gives it ... *boom*. Please don't kill Danny though, if you do I'll stop following this! LOL jk I wouldn't do that until this is complete, but point is, don't kill off my favourite crazy goofball, will you?
Justice237 chapter 15 . 11/25/2014
Aww, this was really sweet. I'm glad she went through pregnancy and birth and came out alive, now just to get rid of Jessup. Still, continue this!
Justice237 chapter 13 . 10/24/2014
Damn, there were some pretty high stakes in this one. Just what I love in a story! Sorry I didn't get a chance to review recently, I've started GCSE year and I'm under a lot of stress. But still, update this!
Justice237 chapter 10 . 9/5/2014
Aww, this was really sweet. I adore their chemistry and I really want to see where their relationship is going. Update!
Justice237 chapter 9 . 8/15/2014
Holy crap her father should wear a giant condom instead of a uniform he's such a dick. I can't believe him. But this was still a great chapter and I look forward to the next
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
I m loving this story. Continues, please
Justice237 chapter 8 . 8/11/2014
I am loving this chapter and this whole story! I really want you to keep this up because this is extremely interesting and I really want to see where it will go. Update!
Justice237 chapter 7 . 8/6/2014
This has actually become one of my most anticipated-for stories for good reason. This chapter was done wonderfully and I'd really love to see some more Kaffee whump!. Update this or I'll go crazy!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/23/2014
I love this story! Please continues...
Justice237 chapter 6 . 7/21/2014
Ooh, this is getting more interesting! Not that this story wasn't interesting before, but it's even more so now.

I actually have a suggestion or two for this story, but I don't want to leave them open to the public eye on the reviews page in case of possible spoilers, so maybe you could PM me?

Update this!
Justice237 chapter 5 . 7/13/2014
Wow, a twist! Update this! I want to see more!
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