Reviews for Naruko Namikaze: Kunoichi in Training (TobiasHawk94 Edit)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3
david.priest.790 chapter 3 . 12/1/2014
Please continue
Evilservant1094 chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
animeluvr810 chapter 3 . 7/9/2014
Update story it is amazing
jokeslover chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
HAHAHA i never thought to call zabuza nobrows that was a good one anyways i love this fanfic and some hot scenes please please write some more!
anime prince chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
Um...are hinata and naruko gonna go out or am i wasting time reading all this for real?! C'ome on
kateg21 chapter 3 . 8/13/2013
please hurry with the rest of the story i love it
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
very nice,keep it up
redwolf23456 chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
great story so far
ArinaSugarBaby chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
This is a nice story but you made her to powerful as it is sure I see how you explained it but honestly still to powerful for her age with that list.
harlequin320 chapter 3 . 4/24/2013
good job, update soon
harlequin320 chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
lol, I have a good feeling about this story, update soon
Acceptance For All chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
more more more more more
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Huh, who the fuck allowed you to just take a fanfic that you deemed not well-written enough and rewrite it in such a way? Do you have no respect for the original author that you would steal their work, vaguely reword it and claim it a remix?
Of course everything I just said is moot if you indeed were allowed by the original author, but if that's the case then you should just STATE so.
Not to mention that it can be safely deduced from the site's rules that this kind of situation is forbidden, and this for two reasons: 1) no fanfiction shall be posted more than once, and 2) since the rules state that there is a minimum level of spelling/grammar/coherency etc. needed in order to submit a story, it implies that an improved version of the fanfic on those points should in fact be the original fanfic (or take the place of the original fanfic).