Reviews for BLACK Invitation (ENGLISH)
SweetBunny4 chapter 15 . 2/10
I'm speechless! This story is by far one of the most impressive and well written I've ever read. Nice narrative, thoughts, structure and perfecly ended, not more nor less. Thank you so much for such an amazing story, I'm now a big fan of yours!

Ps. Consider writing your own book because hell you have talent!
Guest chapter 15 . 4/3/2015
This was seriously one of the most amazing stories I have ever read , this was just simply extremely good .xxx
Deartha chapter 14 . 4/2/2015
OmG I cried a riverrrrr
Foetida chapter 15 . 11/24/2013
Mission accomplished! Jake is alive, they finally get back together, and had a happy ending, yay!
Thanks so much since you actually finish this story until the very end. And a special thanks to Ace for a hot & sweet bonus in this epilogue. Both of you are my favorite authors :) *hugs & congrats*
roquezen chapter 15 . 11/21/2013
jitaaann finally: complete! yeayyyy and I noticed a little surprised here, you didn't write that scene on Indonesian version! Aaaaaa Jake such a hottie, I love them two cute cute cute
Congrats for this final chapter, now I'm gonna read your newest update, hegemony
HalloweenJunky chapter 15 . 11/19/2013
final part, here we go! ah I was glad Jake visiting Sherry and gave her a 'punishment' :)
congratulations author, you did great.
HalloweenJunky chapter 14 . 11/19/2013
skip the final part one and I'll share my thought on here. you know, you have an amazing skills for described a fighting scene. it's just like a movie, but I don't recognize who's Merah Biji? She's appear on RE series / video games? And about the ending, poor Sherry. Hope I'll find a good ending for the next chapter.
HalloweenJunky chapter 11 . 11/19/2013
okay, next. the zombie girl makes me sick, specially when Jake read her diary. creepy.
HalloweenJunky chapter 10 . 11/19/2013
God, I have to read your fic one more time from the first chapter until reached this chapter, hahaha I was laughed at Captain America's part.
gohara01 chapter 15 . 11/19/2013
love the last part, congrats for your fic. awesome.
Lone Wolf Man chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
Sigh, PTSD... Poor Sherry... :'( And poor Jake...

No worries, I have yet to translate the Epilogue with Google yet so I have yet to know what happen next. Wouldn't want to kill the fun now, would I?
Lone Wolf Man chapter 11 . 11/14/2013
What I actually intrigued about this chapter is that you put the infamous 'zombie 'imprisonment', the Emily and Catherine part. Pitting his own zombie family in a prison to preserve them is quite a popular term for most when it comes to zombie story, it provide a rather darker feeling and insanity in it - in this prospect, Groves is definitely insane.

And did you know that child zombie is quite rare? Well, you can't have a zombie child in game cuz it's against the child protection law and stuff (but I don't know why Telltale's Walking Dead could include one, no spoilers intended). It kinda give me a shrill thinking about Emily. Great work. :)
Lone Wolf Man chapter 9 . 11/14/2013
Ah, Leon and his magnetic charm with his tasteless jokes. Put em on Facebook and Tweeter? LOL, there's always something with Leon! XD

Awesome pillow talk, btw. :)
Lone Wolf Man chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
Sorry for being an ass and not reviewing for 12 chapters long, I'm a lazy reviewer you see and I suppose it's only fair if I review the chapters I enjoy the most.

By far, chapter six is my favorite, and I am not talking about only the hotness here. Can you believe that this is translated from Indonesian? Actually, I did try translating this whole chapter using Google (because I have read it in English) and I can't understand anything, but now I certainly do. :) Jake and Sherry are hot. XD
Foetida chapter 14 . 11/12/2013
End of the story? Nope. Jake will be fine, I know he would :)
A bit sad because next update will be the last one, but maybe there's "best for last"?
Waiting for the epilogue!
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