Reviews for New Dawn
Mr.Fallen chapter 7 . 3/8
Thats not just fucked thats fucked up the ass without lubricant with a rough dildo. FIVE KAGES...will he win...YEA, no.
Dark chapter 7 . 2/15
Wow! Sasuke is fucked big time!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/21
Demon's Poet chapter 7 . 1/11
Man...If this is the ending chapter...XD I could live with it. This whole thing. Made my day. Good job on the writing and everything else. 10 out of 10.
powermachine79 chapter 7 . 1/4
what a supreme story can't wait to
Dark Fox God Of The Fist chapter 7 . 12/31/2014
Man, just when I think his ego can't get any bigger. -_-
OG chapter 7 . 11/8/2014
I'm in love. Omg please continue this asap please. I love your view on everything and it is most amazing humor tp put in please. Chapter seven ending I was dying when all Kage showed up. But in all seriousness I loved your story, the back story, the detail and depth, the relationships, every is most youthful. Please continue
justin chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
really using the words from superman vs the elite in the 4th chapter. nice.
MythicGR66 chapter 7 . 7/14/2014
the 4 Good..ish nations (Iwa and Kumo, not really good) decide to split the bounty between them, leveing Sas'uke' up Shit creak with no paddle and an sinking boat, all the while Konoha mourns over the loss of 10 billion Ryo, since most didn't care about the Emo prick Sasuke
MythicGR66 chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
"Wait till they get a load of me" awesome Jack Nicholson's joker and Kick ass reference
uzuuchi007 chapter 7 . 7/9/2014
StrongGuy159 chapter 7 . 6/22/2014
Awesome story continue please.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/14/2014
(Evil sadistic grin) The Uchiha is getting whats been coming to him for a long time
Guest chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
Give my compliments to the cook ear;lier in this chapter
Mystogan814 chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
Damn I like this story already especially when you quoted Joker one of my favorite villains.
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