Reviews for Baby Loopsy
sylviyang11 chapter 1 . 7/28
Oml, I died at how Koko desciribed his need for a diaper change XD

And, oh no, the poor guys. We need to bump into Mikan for her Alice XD
jjcuneocat chapter 1 . 2/15
rofl omg that was too funny loved the ending, keep up the good work because your stories are amazing .
Anastasia Juliet chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Lol hahaha :) This is funny and amusing.
IAmTheBattleMaiden chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
LOL! Oh, that was funny. :) No lighthearted one-shot.
jenibaby chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
Oh God! Somedbody save their repeating poor souls ! Haha
nineties chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Shit. Can someone call Mikan ASAP? These guys are fucking hopeless. xD
sweet little chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Woah! A nice one! Please Go ahead & Good Luck...!
Fiona Starzz chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
Haha Very Funny...
caramelpuffs chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
That was hilarious! How will they ever break the flow of events? XD
crazyindira chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
OOOOOOOOH GOOOOOOOOOOOOSH!How will this ever have a end? Fantastic work,good job!
asdfghjklnatsu97 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
HAHAHAHA. That baby's power was so cool! Dejavu! lol
and it'll happen all over again. pfft
PC chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
This is adorable in so many levels. Gosh, Natsume making silly faces at the baby and Mochu changing diapers and aaaaaah! 3
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
HILARIOUS! *laughing*
Kyouyaa chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Brilliant omg
Eliphante chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Hi! I just read this the other night and I like how short and sweet it was. The story and dialogue flowed really well and I didn't think the characters acted strangely. I particularly enjoyed how Ruka stopped dead in his tracks, so to speak, when he sees Natsume. But I loved imagining Natsume making silly faces at the baby, perhaps reminiscent of baby Aoi? {: Koko was hilarous when describing the baby pooping: "Letting it rip from here to kingdom come," "A doo-doo, a boom-boom—" these lines were priceless. I really liked how it felt that nothing was amiss, that you covered every possible way to continue the oneshot (Like the conversation on whether or not the baby was a boy or Mochu's comment on how the boys should be envious of his alice). I'm not sure what else to add to this review. Great job as always, and thanks for sharing with us your writing

Now back to homework for me }:
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