Reviews for Light and Dark
Reader chapter 34 . 3/8/2014
This chapter was perfect. The way you captured all of the emotions at the beginning of two excited to-be parents for the first time was amazing. All the tiny details and preoccupations they would have was very realistic, from guessing the gender right down to wondering how they would look, how they would be in Temari's arms and everything. Really, all the tiny details made everything perfect and made the loss a lot more hard hitting. I've read Shadows so I was prepared but at the same time I wasn't, if that makes sense lol The loss and the scene were Itachi was carrying her to the healers was so heart wrenching. I loved reading this as much as I hated it as the same time. You did a wonderful job with it!
greetingsfrommaars chapter 32 . 3/7/2014
I'm grinning at my computer screen right now. :D :D
ah, the /Shadows nostalgia. I never really know what to feel when watching horse races. usually, I know nothing about any of the competitors, and I don't really cheer for anyone in particular. here, though, viewing from a single perspective gives me a certain someone to root for :) and then, of course, Itachi comes out of nowhere to spin the universe a new one... though, the looks on her brothers' faces definitely must have been priceless.
the idea of the unchoreographed battle of sorts really suits the two of them. clearly, from the first section here, neither one is ready to cede anything to the other easily, but they have that unshakable, breathtaking trust to go along with their indomitable wills, y'know? {FFN says that "unchoreographed isn't a word. huh. amusingly, it also objects to "FFN".]
I've decided to just give a warning for all future chapters now- I'm probably going to review late most of the time now. meh. my apologies.
Dani Stark chapter 34 . 3/6/2014
I rarely review, but I needed to say how much I liked this chapter. You did a really good job with this, the pacing of the scenes, the description of their feelings that was emotional without being over dramatic. It was just right. I really liked it.

somnusventus chapter 34 . 3/6/2014
Oh my god /-\ I just read Shadows recently, and I knew this was coming, but I was not emotionally prepared ;-;
About halfway into this chapter I started to feel like crying :(
I must say, though, it was amazing anyway, I really love your works, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Clovergirl100 chapter 24 . 3/4/2014
I found the story about itachi falling for a similar for temari stuipt

why deny that itchi had a past girlfriend really i see no point. You could have just mad the girl who sccidently got killed in the uchia clan massacar or prevous girlfriend i do not see a problem with it.

sounvding. Mean i judt found itchi falling for a girl who looks and similar 2 temari because he meet temari once ... Sorry i really have hard time beleiving in that
Guest chapter 33 . 3/2/2014

One of the most adorable chapters once again, and the news was amazing. I didn't expect it happneing until further ahead, but it was quite funny to see the realisations from the three (Itachi, Gaara and definately Kankuro). The last two sentences were especially cute, now that Temari knows she's going to be a mother XD

Great chapter, I'm really looking forward to read the next one soon! xxx
rao hyuga 18 chapter 33 . 2/28/2014
Loved Kankuro's reaction :) Great chapter!
DSaph chapter 33 . 2/28/2014
As usual, another great chapter. I'm glad that you're updating regularly again!
TheGirlWithNoIQ chapter 32 . 2/27/2014
Oh yeah, the horse race! And the fighting-thingie!... I forgot. Aaah, I must read 'Shadows' again.
Please update soon!
Guest chapter 32 . 2/23/2014
Awwww... another very cute chapter and yes, I can relate it to "Shadows". I can't wait to see their progress, Keep on with the good work and I look forward to read the next very soon.
Guest chapter 31 . 2/23/2014
Beautiful and beyond! .

A long awaited chapter, the wedding! It was sooooo cute and very wonderfully written, thank you.

I'm really sorry I wasn't able to review before but here it is! ;) I'm really excited to read the next chapter now! XD
rao hyuga 18 chapter 32 . 2/22/2014
Can't wait to see what happens next!
greetingsfrommaars chapter 31 . 2/21/2014
somewhat late review again... ehe. sorry.
some deja vu there, with Matsuri probably being unable to look her mistress in the face in the near future... hahaha.
I have to agree with you there. the wedding in itself is wonderful, but it does feel even more special after everything else they've been through. it feels like... it gives the feeling that everything else was worth it, to get to this point, y'know?
apparently I'm much more girly than Temari is... throughout the description of her wedding dress, I was flailing and exclaiming at how pretty it sounded. XD
grargh. the Council certainly knows how to sour other people's precious days. meh.
TheGirlWithNoIQ chapter 31 . 2/15/2014
Yaay! They're finally married! :3
Too bad Gaara didn't have the 'talk' with him, hope he will do it soon. XD
I just love ItaTema! :D
Please update soo n! :D
rao hyuga 18 chapter 31 . 2/14/2014
This was so good!
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