|Reviews for SHOUT OF THE MIND, WHISPER OF THE HEART|
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 17 . 3/4
Poor Bella. What I want to know is how Alice knew he couldn't remember Bella. When Jasper woke up, Alice looked smug. You look smug water you've just got away with something. Did she cause the accident?
Maybe Bell should tell Jasper about what she knows about their life before they met. What Alice and mike did to them.
| Twisted Musalih chapter 17 . 1/6
I think that Bella should just let him go. Jasper isnt even trying and all its doing is really hurting her in the process. Plus he did say that he loves Alice. Cant wait to read more
| Twisted-Twilighter chapter 17 . 1/6
I'm almost wishing Bella would just give up and free him of this sham of a marriage. I know Jasper is 'trying', but just staying married and being faithful is not enough at all if you're not invested in it emotionally or physically. His heart is not into it at all, and it is plain obvious to everyone, especially Bella. They should just divorce or something. Bella is hurting too much. It'll probably be better for them if they stay apart for a while. If he really thinks he loves Aliceas much as he does, he should be with her and find out for himself what kind of a woman he'd chosen over Bella.
| NatalieLynn chapter 17 . 1/6
Happy new year! Damn, I cried through the whole chapter again. There's more to honoring your marriage than just not cheating on your spouse. It means both of you being there and supporting one another's needs, psychologically, financially, spiritually, emotionally and physically, so that you both continue to evolve and grow individually and together. Someone needs to kick Jasper's ass and remind him of that. Yes, he's remaining physically faithful to Bella, but he is not even trying to truly honor his marriage. She's ending over backwards for him, and he's all but kicking her in the teeth. Lord knows, he's ripping her heart to shreds. What kind of honorable man can do that to his wife? He was raised to be a better man than he is being. Maybe his grandparents would be the best ones to kick his ass and wake him the hell up. If he's not going to even try to be an active participant in their relationship, he might as well just put Bella out of her misery, file for divorce and go be Alice's plaything until she decides goes flitting off and leave him again. He doesn't even deserve Bella with the way he is keeps pushing her away, keeping her at arm's length. Since Alice's visit, he's totally barricaded his heart against Bella. Hell, he won't even hold her damn hand let alone give her so much as a peck on the cheek or a hug. Instead, he seems to have become hell bent on ripping her heart to shreds.
| loonietune chapter 17 . 1/5
I understand why bella is fighting so hard but it takes two to make a marriage work and if jasper isn't going to even try then she needs to walk away and let him see what he's missing. Please update soon as this is 1 of my favourite stories :)
| tee hill chapter 17 . 1/5
great chapter :-))))))))))))))))))))))))
| katandjasper chapter 17 . 1/5
I hope you don't make us wait long for the next chapter. This is a very sad chapter. She might just as well as let Alice have him because neither one are really living or happy. Yet, I don't blame Bella for wanting to fight for her marriage but sadly Jasper isn't fighting at all, hell, he's not even trying. Please update soon.
| Rhiannon Lovely chapter 17 . 1/5
ugh I just want to cry. please, update soon!
| kids2003 chapter 16 . 11/22/2013
Oh damn u left a hang end there. Wonder what Alice wants now. No scratch that she's only after Jasper. Hope Bella tells someone she's pregnant will be the first she tells... hmmmm I think someone might guess before she has a chance to tell.
| katandjasper chapter 16 . 11/20/2013
Nice chapter just wish it had come sooner. i had to reread the last chapter to remember. Hope the next one comes sooner.
| Rhiannon Lovely chapter 16 . 11/20/2013
ugh my heart can't take this. listening to sad music and reading this is not a good thing, but I love this story.
| tee hill chapter 16 . 11/19/2013
great chapter :))))))))))))))))))))))
| NatalieLynn chapter 16 . 11/19/2013
Just when they were making progress the evil elf has to show up. Why is she on her knees? She better be tying his shoe or begging him for something and not trying to give him a blow job or something...
| NatalieLynn chapter 15 . 10/21/2013
His saying that he thought she was Alice had to hurt her like hell. It sure had me crying for her. He might as well have run a dagger through her heart.
| loonietune chapter 15 . 10/19/2013
I love this story, great bella though, I know jasper keeps going on about betraying and disrespecting alice but can't he see what this is all doin to bella who must be dying inside and yet all he cares about is alice, can't wait for him to remember what happened between them. Looking forward to a new update soon.