Reviews for White Flags |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love the ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful story. I love how you ended it, not with their deaths but with the lead in. Great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() RIDICULOUSLY WONDERFUL STORY! Had me nearly crying at the end, cause I thought you were going to kill them off :'( but you DIDNT, you wonderful Potterhea 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, big jump. I was expecting some fill in the blanks between their first fight with the Voldemort, and now, but I really enjoyed how you ended it. Bravo. Haha, I'm looking forward to what else you come up with in your stories, and no worries, I have already looked into some of your other stories with the link! :D Anyway, thanks for producing such great work, and stringing me along for the last ten chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ironic part is, I really did find this story yesterday. All I have to say is you did a phenominal job. |
![]() ![]() Excellentl proposal! It's so...them. Harry, your father proposed to your mother in front of Vildemort...wow. Sorry about not logging in...it wouldn't let me :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sobbing right now. Thank you for ending it there, or I would be... well, let's not discuss that. Now my mind can pretend that Voldemort never came at all, and they lived happily ever after... The entire story was beautifully written, and it made me fall in love with these characters all over again. Can't wait to read more of your work, and thank you so much for the story you left me with. I wish it was a book so that I could take it out over and over... :) LoneStorm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, it's over. :( And then James and Lily die and I bawl my eyes out. D': GREAT story though, happy writing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Except, except that they never do get to tell Remus...oh gods. Oh gods. Oh Gods. I guessed it was Halloween actually. Yay me :( I don't know how to express exactly how I feel but just know that this is a beautifully writer JILY. Easily one of mine and I'm sure of others too, favourites. Definitely will be waiting to read other things that you post! -Vitzy- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! I loved the proposal and the fighting scenes were amazing! :) I loop pice your writing style! :) happy writing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() One last chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm wandlore...exciting stuff! Sirius' reaction was so natural it makes my heart ache to think what will be happening to their world soon :( Is Peter happy for them? Or is his envy getting ahead of him? How many more chappies left? -vitzy- |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is sooo good. cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg love this please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY GUACAMOLE! BEST PROPOSAL EVER! Wow these last three chapters have killed me so intense, and to end it all with, yay pOtter love! oh deary I hope that doesnt mean te end of the story is coming soon?! :( or are you planning on going until the very part where voledmort kills( |