Reviews for White Flags |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! The question that keeps popping up though is how are they going to use the bathroom or take showers? Since we found out how Sirius changed his shirt without going through Lily lol Until next time, Haru-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good chapter! I wonder how long it will last for Lily and Sirius hands to be stuck together?! Until next time, Haru-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha now things have gotten interesting! I can't wait to see how things will turn up! Until next time, Haru-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I feel sorry for James that at times I wish Lily will cut him some slack! lol Anyways great chapter! Until next time, Haru-chan |
![]() ![]() i love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the ending. Very funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What are the chances of us getting longer chapters? :) |
![]() ![]() Update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was really good. I love how she got all emotional when she found out. Bookworm :) |
![]() ![]() so good your story is so realistic plz update soon cliffhanger is killing me ps: i love your writing style. it flows and reflects your character whilst maintaining the integrity of the story truly you are a gifted writer. pps: update soon! |
![]() ![]() Really good story, i just spotted 1 flaw, In the deathly hallows, when severus snape's memories show him getting sorted, there is a fifth year Lucius Malfoy to congradulate , lily, james, sirius and moony were in the same year. Lucius and remus lupin did not go together in the same year |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please release quickly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very enjoyable and action filled last two chapters. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who is noddy? really really good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor James. Still, when Lily said his name at the ending, I wasn't feeling that sorry for him - I was too busy cracking up! Great chapter, I say. |