Reviews for White Flags |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ahhhh! this is where that association came from! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! more like a FAT chance! seriously how did Wormtail not realize that Malfoy's plan was idiotic from the start. James and Sirius were like brothers, no way would one not recognize the other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooooooh! do they suspect? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minnie knowing enough about Dumble's habits to cut him off prematurely was definitely the highlight of this great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a nice read! There were some parts that I thought could have been expanded upon, and certain aspects that seemed a bit funky, but overall it was a joy to watch your story unfold. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, your later stories make this last chapter really sad, what with the timing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did they not have anti-Apparition wards up? I mean, obviously not, I guess. Voldemort must have been overconfident. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even without proof, they should have told Dumbledore anyway. At worst he'd just be on the lookout a bit, and at best he'd solve the problem for them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Someone better figure it out before James has to escape all on his own and tell them himself. |
![]() ![]() Another brilliant story... a sort of prequel I guess. Your writing and your interpretation of the story and the characters is wonderful and totally addictive. Thank you again and again. |
![]() ![]() That was lovely to read. I haven't read much about the Marauders in school so it was a pleasure to have a backstory filled in. It was pretty exciting too. An excellent segue to the last chapter without going overboard. We all know what happened next so it was good to refrain. Made it more poignant. We are left with a rather obvious problem though, in that Snape knows Peter was the traitor. Wouldn't he have told Dumbledore when he joined the Light side? Even if it was too late to save the Potters, Dumbledore would have been able to save Sirius from Azkaban. Anyway, it was a pleasure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Lily is rather mean and judgmental. It's hard to see why he likes her so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting take on what saved Harry that Halloween night, quite unique and unexpected - and a wonderful arc towards Harry's defeat of Voldemort 17 years later. Despite ~knowing~ what comes next, I can't help but wish to read ~your~ version of it! Very well done! |
![]() ![]() OKAY I AM MID WAY THROUGH THE CHAPTER AND I JUST SQUEALED IN DELIGHT AT THE FACT THAT REG AND SIRIUS GET ALONG WELL |