|Reviews for Chasm|
| StarSlingerSnitch chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
Haha, funny as always. The beginning with Mia...oh well, it can't be helped. Emily's generosity was a nice touch. Things are getting intense though. Intense man, I tell you, intense! As for the yaoi...I have nothing against it, as you know. ;) And the scene with Antonio and Mike is like that scene with Jayden and Emily in 'Unexpected Arrival', I believe. What's to happen next, I wonder?
| Jemilyfan6 chapter 4 . 11/25/2013
Yaaay I'm glad u uptaded nice chapter can't wait for more keep it up
| youaresunriseandiamsunset chapter 4 . 11/24/2013
Oh my god, she lives! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?! I've been waiting forever for this update! Sad that Abby's not in it, but it was still awesome either way! Everything is becoming so intense and awesome, and I'm seriously just dying to know what happens next! Way to go with this chapter chica, it's great to see you are still in the writing game and I can't wait to talk to you and read the next update! :D
| Selena chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
Great story! Can't wait to read more and see what happens next. (:
| youaresunriseandiamsunset chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
Wow, what an intense night for Mike! Man, he just has the worst luck. I wonder what that moment with Jayden was all about... Great job with the chapter girlie, I can't wait for the next update! :D
| StarSlingerSnitch chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
Loved it! Absolutly brilliant! Antonio and Mike are so hilarious and everything else is just amazingly awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't make me wait-warning you! Smile smile!
| StarSlingerSnitch chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
Awww it's not too bad. I liked it. I mean, Jemily! The idea is getting there, for sure. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| youaresunriseandiamsunset chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
Good god, that was absolutely fantastic! I seriously cannot begin to describe how awesome this chapter was; words simply fail me. Fantabulous job on the chapter, I loved everything about it! :)
P.S. I forgot to remind you earlier, but you should probably remind the audience that Abby belongs to me. :P
| Psycho Tangerine chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Great start. I assume there is something more to that tree and something is causing Mike's feelings of jealousy. You did a nice job of introducing Abby. I hope you keep her as a normal, albeit sarcastic, college student.
| stayband chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Great beginning! I like that Mike has the number from Abby. And I like too that Jayden and Emily are together! I can't wait to read more! Sorry for the grammar
| StarSlingerSnitch chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Aww poor Mike. It sucks to be feeling like that. I bet I can guess what's going on with Kevin and Mia! :) glad to see Abby coming along nicely, she did a good job, didn't she WideOpenSpacesGirl045? ;) you've inuded Jemily, which is always great and I like how ended. Can't wait to see what happens next with this apocalyptic setting!
| youaresunriseandiamsunset chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
YAY! It's finally up! You did a lovely job with Abby my friend, I absolutely thought that she was fantastic. :D Great job with the beginning of the story, I can't wait for your next update! :D