Reviews for Take the Shot
Miki321 chapter 5 . 7/28
~Star I loved this story and I recon its fine how you ended it although a sequel would be nice. Your a great writer
Miki321 chapter 1 . 7/28
I love it so far! It's a really great intro! Can't wait to read more:)
Satan Pellegrino chapter 2 . 7/17
Guest chapter 4 . 7/2
How could you let jack die. How could you.
WolfAndBookLover chapter 5 . 6/22
A somber fan chapter 5 . 6/20
A sequel is needed.
Maybe you can bring a new guardian and a revived Jack.
All I know is it can't end like this.
And when you ponder your choices to make a sequel or not
Take into consideration that all broken things can't be fixed but they can be reused
Fix Jack. or Erase his memories and start anew.
I don't care just fix what you did
because this can't be the end
it has to be just the beganing
it HAS to be
Guest chapter 4 . 6/11
You seriosly let jack die. (sob)
He is my favorite character.
Dumbledore19 chapter 1 . 5/7
That was an amazing, fantastic spontaneous story! You need to do a sequel! start chanting *sequel sequel*. Come everyone join with me.
Then everyone starts chanting *sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel SEQUEL!*
Zoey chapter 5 . 5/1
Sequel sequel sequel !
Zoey chapter 4 . 5/1
Why did he die!?,!?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/25
there should be a sequel to this fanfiction
Home4MentallyUnstable chapter 2 . 4/19
Home4MentallyUnstable chapter 1 . 4/19
Ruh-Roh Raggy
Blind Sky chapter 5 . 1/18
1, make a sequel!
Blind Sky sad chapter 4 . 1/18
Very sad...
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