Reviews for Lost Moon (Prequel to Vengeful Star)
jansails chapter 23 . 3/2/2014
Time to reset some boundaries?
Doesn't sound too good, does it?
jansails/jan2
hufflepuffpride21 chapter 23 . 3/1/2014
What happened with Jacob? Something did seem strange. ..
Vampswols4L chapter 23 . 3/1/2014
Omg what's happening with Jacob?! I'm worried!:( why is Alice acting so strange too?!
Vampswols4L chapter 22 . 2/21/2014
She still hasn't talked to Jacob?!:( Crap they told them doesn't that break the treaty?
Lady-Isowen chapter 21 . 2/21/2014
Really looking forward to the next chapter! Great work!
hufflepuffpride21 chapter 21 . 2/13/2014
She needs to choose herself...become dependant on herself...live for herself!
jansails chapter 21 . 2/13/2014
Bella's just outright painful to watch.
Bella's self-flagellating at this point.
Maybe Bella's dream is telling her to pick herself & deny both Edward & Jacob as romantic interests.
Bella should obviously choose to allow the Cullens & the pack to protect her from Victoria & her newborn army until they are eliminated.
Then, Bella needs to quit focusing on the pain of rejection.
Far better would it be to start focusing on doing & attaining the things which make her feel joy or fulfilled- whether it's taking a literary semester at Oxford or a pastry course at The Culinary Institute, or volunteering during summer break on a mission trip.
Bella needs to break the cycle she's in.
jansails/jan2
YBR.Horse chapter 21 . 2/13/2014
Great chapter!
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2014
More more more more
Guest chapter 20 . 2/13/2014
UUUPPP
NG chapter 21 . 2/13/2014
Oh yeah
Jacob is as dangerous as Edward is!
This is the truth.
yuuupi
I want a Bella and Jasper friendship! 3
Vampswols4L chapter 21 . 2/13/2014
Please tell me she isn't going to be with Jacob now! :/
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2014
I love this story, but I was disappointed by the lack of Jacob in this chapter! I know it was more about how Bella felt, but could we have some more of our favourite wolf in the next one please?
jansails chapter 20 . 2/12/2014
That was a horrible encounter with Jacob, but it taught him a lesson.
Jake learned he could be just as dangerous as a Cullen to Bella.
Bella felt fear & abandonment much like she felt from Edward when he left to keep her "safe".
jansails/jan2
NG chapter 20 . 2/12/2014
WWOOOOOOW
I'm speachless!
Wow wow wow
Jacob freaked out!
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