|Reviews for The Swing of Things|
| Relaxing Pikachu chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Touching story regarding the potty training thing, but there's a problem with that...she attended preschool. In preschool, we potty train the kids. We do bathroom trips and all that when they're about two. As a matter of fact, by the time she met Arnold, she should've been in the training stage by then. Some kids wet the bed for quite a few reasons...like stress or distress or they just have weak or sensitive bladders. I'll go with the former in Helga's case given her neglected upbringing...but yeah...Helga training herself just seems super unlikely.
| Mars chapter 11 . 3/22/2016
Awwww! I loved it! You know the characters so well and you have great story pacing!
I'm so happy I came across your work- now that I finished I'll try very hard to get back to work!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/1/2016
Beautiful story! Your theme for the story was quite unique, which the more reason why I adored it more. You made my Sunday afternoon :)
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/8/2015
Ohh everything was really beauthiful. Thanks for the fic.
| chicaalterego chapter 11 . 10/15/2014
Cute. I liked it. I also noticed you have deleted scenes on this... I certainly am crossing my fingers here for something about Cecile ;)
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/6/2014
awww that bow is so for arnold
| MidnightLuve chapter 6 . 2/6/2014
i kinda wanna know what happened to helga that she says she is not in love with him like she was before and i know im asking myself this and im gonna find out soon anyway XD
| Kimarys Adriana chapter 11 . 2/2/2014
bravo. unless you're a girl. In which case, brava.
| Kimarys Adriana chapter 6 . 2/2/2014
i know it doesnt matter since u already wrote the chapter but, artistic freedom. if u want more lemons put in more lemons. if not, dont. this is YOUR story. if ppl dont like it, they dont have to read it
| Kimarys Adriana chapter 5 . 2/2/2014
I cried. Your answer is yes, you did helga justice. i grew up similar to helga. im the oldest and im a tomboy. but my mom and my stepdad focused on my younger brother. the child they shared. for that reason, helga is a character that is close to my heart. i know what its like to raise yourself and grow up feeling unwanted. your portrail was beautiful and it touched me. Even now im still crying even though its stupid.. great job
| Kimarys Adriana chapter 4 . 2/2/2014
hmmmm... im guessing arnold forgot that YES he dosent have to be careful of tbe baby BUT cumming inside of helga can now indeed get her pregnant again. lol silly lovers. baby number two!
| Lewis-Sama chapter 11 . 10/29/2013
Awesome, it was even better than the first it sequaled. Arnold and Helga finally announced their love for eachother.
| Butterfly-Muse chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
Well this was most certainly a great read it had a good mix of humor and just sweet all around. I love the family dynamic of Arnold's family supporting them and even the Pataki's making an effort to meet Helga halfway and of course of the growing love between Arnold and Helga (though its always been there just Arnold coming to terms with it and Helga finally deciding to trust enough to give in).
And their son was just simply adorable to read about, especially on his first birthday.
I'll be looking out for other works by you
so keep up the great work!
| Stavros 92 chapter 11 . 7/27/2013
Epic epilogue can't wait to read running the bases! Love how you write fics!
| gardenOFeden777 chapter 11 . 7/26/2013
wow i cannot wait to get started on running the bases i hope there is a proposal soon, cant help myself with how much i freaking love this story!