Reviews for The Swing of Things
Guest chapter 11 . 3/8
Ohh everything was really beauthiful. Thanks for the fic.
chicaalterego chapter 11 . 10/15/2014
Cute. I liked it. I also noticed you have deleted scenes on this... I certainly am crossing my fingers here for something about Cecile ;)
Guest chapter 7 . 2/6/2014
awww that bow is so for arnold
MidnightLuve chapter 6 . 2/6/2014
i kinda wanna know what happened to helga that she says she is not in love with him like she was before and i know im asking myself this and im gonna find out soon anyway XD
Kimarys Adriana chapter 11 . 2/2/2014
bravo. unless you're a girl. In which case, brava.
Kimarys Adriana chapter 6 . 2/2/2014
i know it doesnt matter since u already wrote the chapter but, artistic freedom. if u want more lemons put in more lemons. if not, dont. this is YOUR story. if ppl dont like it, they dont have to read it
Kimarys Adriana chapter 5 . 2/2/2014
I cried. Your answer is yes, you did helga justice. i grew up similar to helga. im the oldest and im a tomboy. but my mom and my stepdad focused on my younger brother. the child they shared. for that reason, helga is a character that is close to my heart. i know what its like to raise yourself and grow up feeling unwanted. your portrail was beautiful and it touched me. Even now im still crying even though its stupid.. great job
Kimarys Adriana chapter 4 . 2/2/2014
hmmmm... im guessing arnold forgot that YES he dosent have to be careful of tbe baby BUT cumming inside of helga can now indeed get her pregnant again. lol silly lovers. baby number two!
BartWLewis chapter 11 . 10/29/2013
Awesome, it was even better than the first it sequaled. Arnold and Helga finally announced their love for eachother.
The-Devil-Butterfly chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
Well this was most certainly a great read it had a good mix of humor and just sweet all around. I love the family dynamic of Arnold's family supporting them and even the Pataki's making an effort to meet Helga halfway and of course of the growing love between Arnold and Helga (though its always been there just Arnold coming to terms with it and Helga finally deciding to trust enough to give in).

And their son was just simply adorable to read about, especially on his first birthday.

I'll be looking out for other works by you

so keep up the great work!
Stavros 92 chapter 11 . 7/27/2013
Epic epilogue can't wait to read running the bases! Love how you write fics!
gardenOFeden777 chapter 11 . 7/26/2013
wow i cannot wait to get started on running the bases i hope there is a proposal soon, cant help myself with how much i freaking love this story!
dustbunniehailey chapter 11 . 7/26/2013
The ending was sublime! Loved it! Cant wait for everything else! ; D
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DBH
Panfla chapter 11 . 7/26/2013
i love the ending :3 so simple but at the same time so perfect!
lol im so obsessed whit your fic that im already downloading all the songs you listed xD
Ethereal Wishes chapter 11 . 7/26/2013
The end was perfect! Great job ! :)
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