|Reviews for In The East|
| hama431 chapter 11 . 3/10
Update the next chapter please
Will yugi fall for atemu and vice versa
Will yugi fall for someone else
Is yami in this story
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/2
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/2
I miss himmmmm! Wahhhhhhhh! TTTT
| Ern Estine 13624 chapter 11 . 2/9
getting super good can't wait for more
| Princess Milexi chapter 1 . 2/2
When will you be updating this?
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/7/2014
Please can you update because this is a fantastic story an I cannot wait for the rest please dont give up on this story even though it has almost been a year I am sure lots of people would like to read it. Dont give up on this story because it is one of the best I have read :)
| My Hopes and Dreams chapter 11 . 5/17/2014
Plz update this story. There are probably a lot of people who read this story and they like I do want to read the next chapter. Hope there's an UPDATE. ಠ_ಠ unless you want me to cry... ಥ_ಥ ... Ja!
| Dark-Wiccan-Goddess chapter 11 . 4/3/2014
It's been 9 months, why no update?! Just finished this story in a day and need more!
| applepie1989 chapter 11 . 3/29/2014
I enjoyed the story thus far and cant wait for the next chapter :)
| lone goth-kitten chapter 11 . 10/19/2013
Started reading it and couldn't stop! Can't wait till the next chapter!
| YugiohFreak19 chapter 11 . 9/24/2013
I love this story, soo much! I remembered that you had been in the process of writing a fem!Yugi story after I read Gambit. Much to my suprise you had updated it rather quickly from where I had last read it from. I have also realised that I am such a stupid person haha I had to google quite alot of the words in your story so I could understand why you used paticular works in a sentance, I do thank you for it though haha, you broadened my vocabulary haa.
Now back to my review.. I strangely really liked Qazzadara he was a funny chap, but I liked that he was really fatherly towards Yugi in a kinda strange way. When I initially started reading I know the first thing that I thought was that they where lovers. Ironically that wasn't the case I found their relationship absoulutly ipresiousi, beautiful in the way you worded it. An gosh when he fell down thoughs stairs , and I could actually hear the screech that Yugi called out for him in, igodi that broke somthing inside me man.
Im a puzzle/blindshipper at heart so I was really annoyed at Atemu and Anzu's relationship, it really wound me up, but after a while I really felt for Anzu and she grew on me haha and when she died, it was quite upseting, as she was giving birth I new that either her or the baby was going to die but you just had to be mean to Atemu and take them both.. I should have seen it coming but, I never strangely enough, It really was sad I cried. And now Atemu's feelings are changing form hatered towards Yugi, although it fells like its only due to loneliness a bit because of how quick but I've never properly fell in love so I don't know if things can change that quickly in terms of feelings but hay ho :P
This story is great and I can't wait for the next chapter, hope your fine and will be waiting for the next amazing -no doubt- chapter.
Love, YugiohFreak19 3 Xxx
| Poe chapter 11 . 9/15/2013
Can't wait for more
| Lavender Rains chapter 11 . 8/23/2013
Hey there! I know, I know, it's been awhile.. College started again, so I'm getting to be quite busy now. Anyway, I finally managed to catch up to the most recent chapter, still engrossed in all of the amazing writing and suspense.
So far I've gotten: Atemu is a stubborn ass, Yugi is a clever smartass, lol. Match made in heaven, haha! Atemu is starting to silently warm up to Yugi I think, and the end of this recent chapter I felt Atemu and Yugi were somewhat vocally playing with each other..
Not sure what to think of next time, it's exciting thinking about it though! I'm actually enjoying the het a bit more than I thought I would, it doesn't really make a difference I suppose, like with yaoi, it still keeps me interested. Though I don't think I'd care much for Dom!Yugi or Fem!Atemu/Yami.. But you're making it work, and I'm absolutely enjoying it!
Quite short review, but I'm in a bit of a hurry, so I hope this is satisfactory for such a well-written masterpiece! I do hope to see you again soon, and good luck with your testing and such! By the way, Happy Belated Birthday Van! Hope it's glorious ;P
| calypso tchaka chapter 11 . 7/31/2013
thank you ver much for the chapter! I'm enjoying everything, and reread some of the previous ones. It's interesting how it almost reads like a cacophony of staccato rhythms with all the unrest in the beginning, and now we're paling the waiting game. Adagio anyone? :)
very happy birthday to you! many blessings and love for the coming day. take care and don't party too hard ;)
| The Back Up chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Hello, I put a follow on this the other end but was too tired to write a review then. So came back just to say I like this very much, it is very well written and I am looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens next.