|Reviews for In The East|
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/13
I love your story ! I also need to know what the meaning of "gem faher" ! Anyway I wish you will update soon :).
I like the systeme where the woman have some power in royalty !
| portgasd chapter 11 . 8/13
| Ganzademon chapter 11 . 7/17
Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon Love this story
| Emori Loul chapter 11 . 5/7
I know this work hasn't updated in an eternity, but I'd like to leave a message about how fond of it I still am, as I've just reread it again.
I love the culture clash, the Eastern-centric narrative so underrepresented in our Western-centric world, and the sensible yet foreign mechanics of this country you've built. It's stepping into another world, like Anzu thinks, but we're also granted with the ability to see its endearing qualities through Yuugi, so we don't see it as frightening. Indeed, the contrast between the comparatively more enlightened East and the self-absorbed West (at least, from a modern moral standpoint), and the hypocricies lining everyone's interactions, makes for an interesting political reading with no character being perfect or (too) unsympathetic (although everything is still your fault Atem).
One thing I'd previously suspected but didn't notice nearly as much until this read through was how much Atem is clearly sexually attracted to Yuugi from the very beginning-there's just a ton subtle moments when he's staring at her, sexualizing her, even when he shouldn't. The fact that he hates her seems to interact with this, and perhaps that hatred and that lust feed off each other, for while I don't doubt his love for Anzu, he seems more obsessed with watching and hating Yuugi than attending to his wife while she's alive-with, for what I can see, no real reason for his obsessive behavior. Yes, Yuugi seems to practice a kind of spiritual magic, but he doesn't know that, so why?
His persistent demonizing of her, even (apparently) before he went to England and armed himself with the excuse of Christianity and the knowledge that she's a gypsy, seems more like a really sexually frustrated guy blaming a woman for his frustration, and so finds any and every stock mysogynistic excuse to hate her. Such a pity that this stupidity killed his wife. It really makes me wonder what happened when Yuugi was first called to court, for him to have such a strong hate-crush on her when all she seems to have done is nursed his father back to health.
Ah well. This story is still wonderful, even if it will likely never be finished. I just wanted to leave this here and tell you how much I still love it. Have a nice day!
| YUUKO TSUKIYAMA chapter 11 . 5/6
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/29/2016
I really hope you'll decide to come back to your fanfiction one day. Your stories are truly enjoyable and it would be a shame to leave masterpieces like this unfinished.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
So good, I will wait until the day I die
| Link is awesome chapter 11 . 1/11/2016
Please come back to this story...I hate Fem!Yugi fics, but this one keeps you in edge all along... Please dont abandon us! T_T
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
This is like my favorite yugioh story I cry
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/13/2015
Please come back to the story. It's really good to be left undone.
| SweetAnimeLover chapter 11 . 9/19/2015
| Ghost of a Rose chapter 11 . 9/15/2015
Wonderful story so far I'm loving that your not rushing the shipping it makes every chapter so much more temping! Hope you update soon!
| Burning Lights chapter 11 . 6/12/2015
I love this story.
The plot it is something new and original.
I think I'm going to read it more then once and hope it's not abondoned.
| hama431 chapter 11 . 3/10/2015
Update the next chapter please
Will yugi fall for atemu and vice versa
Will yugi fall for someone else
Is yami in this story
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/2/2015