Reviews for Betrayal
Guest chapter 6 . 5/10/2016
More please
Guest chapter 6 . 1/29/2016
Just doing the 31 days of Holby City & today's was fanfic. This was my chosen one, I've just re-read & I miss this
HerMajestyMrsElijahMikaelson chapter 6 . 9/30/2013
Loveing the story! Please, please, please update soon? xxxxx
Guest chapter 6 . 9/23/2013
I read this all last night when I really should have been having an early night but I couldn't stop because these two characters are adorable in their frustrating ways! I hope you come back t this soon because it's lovely and I think it's my current favourite fic.
Jo chapter 6 . 9/9/2013
Been on holiday but this is a treat to come back to. A great take on an interesting episode. I'm glad you didn't sucumb to the possibility of them getting back together so soon... They are getting back, right?
Don't usually ship Ric and Serena but this is holding my interest despite that. Really hope ypu update soon x
five46 chapter 6 . 9/8/2013
I absolutely love this story! It makes me laugh though, considering their 'relationship' in the actual show. And Serena being...well so strict. I really like your writing style and I love your notes, they make me laugh too! But what a cliffhanger to leave it on, please write more soon! I can't wait for the next bit :)

P.s, hope you managed to catch up with those episodes you missed!
ScarletMissCharlotte chapter 6 . 9/4/2013
I love how you keep coming back to Ric's conversation with Elliot. Interested to see how this continues especially when it comes to Lilah and Imedla.

Very much liking this :)
EllieMillerBroadchurch chapter 6 . 9/4/2013
Absolutely brilliant, I really cannot wait till the next chapter. Keep it moving.. :)
MistyMae chapter 6 . 9/3/2013
I can't wait to find out what happens next! Amazing update.x
Guest chapter 6 . 9/3/2013
Loved it ! Do update soon
Guest chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
Nice update. Whilst usually team HH/Serena, I really could have seen this happening at the time!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
I get the feeling that it's all about to go downhill rather quickly. Poor Ric. Great update x
ScarletMissCharlotte chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
Ah lovely to see an update.

I found this chapter very true to character, the way they switch from rather lovely little moments, to those of anger and annoyance, and then back again.

Look forward to seeing what you have in store next time.
MistyMae chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
Excellent writing again and a really good update. I could picture everything unfolding. Can Serena really be that nice?lol. Cannot wait for the next update.x
EllieMillerBroadchurch chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
Love this chapter! :) Update again very soon! x
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