Reviews for All hearts are broken
Ennui Enigma chapter 21 . 5/26/2013
"Fragments of John,of the past and future, of himself,of everything which made him, fly about and reshape themselves into new and magical forms in the secret places where no eye can travel and no heart can influence the outcome." - lovely.
Ennui Enigma chapter 19 . 5/26/2013
"Sherlock can be ruthless, focused, driven - but he is not cold. He has a heart, however darkly he wraps it in sarcasm and despite. In fury he is full of passion. " - good description of Sherlock. Striking.
Ennui Enigma chapter 18 . 5/26/2013
silver threads of memories. nicely woven.
Ennui Enigma chapter 17 . 5/26/2013
Couple lines that stuck out to me in this chapter:

"He is looking at John, the laser look, the Sherlock scan. "
"It's been ages since Sherlock insulted him." - interesting how the little things that used to annoy can be comforting when no longer around.
Ennui Enigma chapter 16 . 5/26/2013
Very Sherlock-y proposal here. Can certainly picture it.
Ennui Enigma chapter 15 . 5/26/2013
Mary is actually rather the only sensible person in this story so far. She is at least aware of feelings, sentiment, and such and willing to voice them. John and Sherlock are both living lies.
Ennui Enigma chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
"There is a tiny chink of sound as his ring strikes the glass." - nice to add elements containing sound in your scene description. Creates a fuller picture of the scenes.

Cute humour at the end of this chapter.
Ennui Enigma chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
Memories. Certainly seem to be haunting both men.

"It is as if Sherlock sheds a veil. It floats away, a silken cloth which has shielded his true face from view, and lies on the carpet between them for a few moments. John sees his eyes, naked and vulnerable..." poignant line.
Ennui Enigma chapter 12 . 5/26/2013
Text message rather telling.

I have a prior engagement. SH
Then the second one.
I will always have a prior engagement. SH
Ennui Enigma chapter 11 . 5/26/2013
"Useful, yes, necessary, even, but it had momentarily made him real instead of false, and Sherlock wants to avoid that. Only designated people see his real self, at specific times permitted by him, and even then it is uncomfortable." - interesting.
Ennui Enigma chapter 10 . 5/26/2013
nicely described scenes. well done. I can hear the silk :)
Ennui Enigma chapter 9 . 5/26/2013
Rather feels like a post break-up fling... in Sherlock's case, a post breakup case, complete with a woman.
Lady Laran chapter 24 . 5/25/2013
I hope that he's not in love with her! He's gotta love John forever and ever!
Kerlyssa chapter 24 . 5/25/2013
Cocaine, or dangerous women, Sherlock just can't say no.
EnvyLuna chapter 24 . 5/25/2013
Sherlock's emotions are so confusing
Does he like john? Does he like her? *bangs head off wall* anyway this was an awesome update and set me on edge for the next one. And I'm not just saying that because of possible brain damage either!
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