Reviews for All hearts are broken |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me that things work out for John and Sherlock! I can't take the emotional trauma anymore! D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing :D Loved the "remembered" scenes, gives more insight as to what happened between the two. I can actually really understand why Sherlock is trying to not see John in some way. I mean, it was left unspoken but they clearly had something there, in a Sherlockian way :) Keep up, can't wait to read what's next :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending of this last was physically painful. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, John. Ya done goofed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. I loved how John was struggling with the idea of being or not Sherlock's ex, he clearly misses him. Probably even wishes something more had happened. Poor him, it's acutally breaking his heart even if he loves Mary.. And Sherlock, even if it's to try to forget or keep away the pain of losing John to Mary or to keep things real with Liesel, it's kind of sad for John & Mary for him to say he'll always have a prior engagement. Awww well I just loved this chapter as i always do, look at me babbling around haha! Can'T wait to read the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, I feel conflicted about the story thus far. I like the idea the John and Sherlock still need each other (totally thought this was gonna be johnlock) and then some other lady is thrown in the mix! My feels are currently in conflict with my curosity, cause I can't not stop reading now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again a very well written chapter. Loved the fight, I'd totally want to see some fighting like this, all the things Sherlock would say haha :) Keep up the good work ! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good fic, keep up the amazing work, cant wait to see what's next ! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story! I've enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poignant descriptions. Sets a mournful tune for this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the lemon slice analogy. bitterness and sacrifice for another's happiness... "droops across the kitchen to the coffee pot " - LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() John certainly has a vivid and detailed memory of this brief event. Rather an ingrained memory by the depth of the emotion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting juxtaposition of lines: "knife is in her hand, blade side towards John" .. "the first big lie." |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting development... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Work does have a way of distracting from hurtful emotions. Curious to see when the ring turns up again. |