Reviews for Lord Emperor - Dark Hunter
lasslowerence chapter 24 . 10/21
So, was Jasmine really necessary to this history? if you take her out it wont change anything.. i thought it was pretty cool that she reject sirius the first time, its fucking weird to him to be with her as she harry kid, but you ended up making her staying with him, MEH.

for the other parts there are some inconsistence but it was quite neat history
pix25 chapter 24 . 9/30
Nice story
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 24 . 9/13
This was very enjoyable, pity there is not one additional chapter showing their reaction and maybe one with MC giving Sirius the shovel talk if he's not married Jasmine yet. It's rather sad how Future Harry and Daphne never really 'lived' after Tom was taken care of, even the Daughter they did everything for left to never return, they were still old enough by wizarding standards to have more children too.
acowles02 chapter 18 . 8/18
Ot to mention they are intetnationally known
HeartsGlow chapter 1 . 8/16
wow, took him 32 years to track down all the DE's and families. Well, if he started after defeating Voldie at the age of nearly eighteen. In 2030 Harry and Theo would be fifty years old. Theo must have had his first child right out of Hogwarts for them to be in their 30s. Good start to the story though.
MicroPie chapter 24 . 7/11
I feel really bad for Hannah
Bigginns82 chapter 1 . 6/11
Thank you for sharing your story! I very much enjoyed it and look forward to reading your other work.
HeartsGlow chapter 24 . 4/26
in 2010, Hildie and Django would now be 88. Daphne "lost" her daughter. I feel so bad for young Harry, he was pretty much abandoned here. I feel bad that D&H pretty much caused Neville's children of the future to become nonexistent. I don't know that anything was made better except that old Harry got to spend more time with Dahne (which he could have done if they'd have stayed) and young Harry found his Daphne at a younger age. He still suffered a lot growing up, found his Godfather, who didn't die, but still abandoned him.
HeartsGlow chapter 10 . 4/26
this is actually a review for chapter9. ...By 1977 Harry had only apprehended four criminals in five years. That would in no way make him well-known. What has he been doing with himself all the rest of the time? Now he has to wait another five years to catch the next one? It would have made more sense to just go back to the early 80s and start in the US than to waste a decade in the past on just four criminals. That way they would be 50 in 1982 instead of 60 years old.
HeartsGlow chapter 8 . 4/26
well, so they are fifty years old in 1972. James, Lily, etc would be heading for their second year at Hogwarts in Sept. 1972. When Harry and Daphne are born in 1980, the elder ones will be fifty-eight. More than old enough to be Lily or James' parents, LOL.
HeartsGlow chapter 7 . 4/26
So, they aren't going back in time to their younger selves, but as "extra" people. They are going to 'help' the past Harry? If they are staying as adults, why are they worried about finding each other, about the 'other' Harry being with Daphne at the right time? Unless that would "erase" them in the past if past (younger) Harry and Daphne don't get together. This makes my head hurt, they will actually be wiping out or changing future (current?) Neville and Hannah, as things there will be changed too.
HeartsGlow chapter 4 . 4/26
What I don't get is why Harry waited until he was nearly thirty to propose to Ginny. I would have thought he'd do that a year or three after defeating Voldie at the ripe-old age of eighteen (LOL). Even Neville waited until his mid-to-late thirties to have kids if they are still in Hogwarts. So, did he not marry until his thirties?
Bob Ganga chapter 6 . 4/18
Ha Ha Ha , With all the serious stuff going on , To slip in the " Galaxy Quest " line was unexpected.- Nice one
Lord Cartwright chapter 24 . 3/31
While I enjoyed most of this, your consistency for forgetting what you have done is very annoying, its like you have an idea, put the idea into the story then a chapter or two later you have the same idea and put it into the story again, i.e. Harry telling Daphne of his first 2 years of school twice or Sirius been told of the scar Horcrux twice. Not to mention the way you spell Veritaserum as two words is mind numbing. I won't even get into Sirius falling in love with his Godsons daughter.
agentinfinity chapter 24 . 3/18
You did a fantastic job on this story!
Keep up the great work!
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