Reviews for There and Back Again
goddess chapter 13 . 10/30/2015
I too have problems when writing character's in my stories that are based around fictional people such as Kurt Hummel. I tend to forget sometimes that I'm not writing about Ryan murphy's character Kurt Hummel but about the character Kurt Hummel that I invented in my story, they may be the same person but they are two different character's all together. A word of advice from a fellow writer, hate Ryan murphy's character Kurt Hummel if you don't like him any more but don't hate your Kurt Hummel there not the same character. Oh and making them brake up I don't really recommend it, but I do recommend a twist somewhere so the story doesn't start to get repetitive, I would have it around Kurt trying to figure out Sebastian. And having Kurt turning into an azz isn't that big of a deal it might even be a good idea his boyfriend is in another state, modeling for some girl Kurt is sexually frustrated he only gets to see Wes every once in awhile and the whole thing with Sebastian is driving him crazy, he's an angel around the ND and an azz at Dalton no one gets to see the real Sebastian but Thad. Don't give up on this okay. oh I want to see them have some babies :) good luck with this.
big glee famanic chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
You could always give this up for adoption. I mean I hate it when an author stops writing (I hate it more when I do it because I loose inspiration all together) I love Wert and I defiantly love this and the Asian mystery. I hope you can learn to love Kurt again but if not again with my first suggestion out it up for adoption.
StrainAsylum chapter 13 . 8/9/2014
Ah - I wondered. Room 213 was so anti-Kurt that it was unreadable for me. That's OK; I feel the same way about Blaine. Take care.
StrainAsylum chapter 11 . 8/9/2014
Sebastian wasn't in PARIS when Thad was going through all that. And Wes knows it, since Wes met him at Scandals.
StrainAsylum chapter 10 . 8/9/2014
Really love the Montchangs brothers and this was a great resolution to the "Asian F" fiasco... Great dynamic. Kind of confused, though; in "The Asian Mystery", Kurt and Chris had really bonded - they were adorable. I don't understand why Chris might not have gone to Kurt for at least some comfort, or why Kurt wouldn't do what Puck did and comfort Chris. How could Kurt just ignore someone who was like a younger brother before? I loved how sweet they were and how nicely Kurt fit into the Montchang family, along with Tina and Rachel...

I hope those jerk guys get caught and locked up.
StrainAsylum chapter 9 . 8/9/2014
OMG...poor Chris keeps getting the crap beat out of him...I sure hope it wakes up Mike. I wish Kurt could talk to Mike and get him to open up. Or is Kurt an accessory in this? Good story, but I think you need help with tenses and such. Do you need a beta? Such a good story-
StrainAsylum chapter 5 . 8/9/2014
LOVE THIS version! Love the Montchangs and have always love Kurt/Mike and Kurt/Wes. Chris is adorable & has the best effect on Rachel. Love the Warblers...Kurt and the Warblers were never worked up enough. Will Blaine get together with Sebastian? I don't normally care much for SeBlaine (though do like Kurtbastian), but this mix would do well.
Thenchick chapter 5 . 4/26/2014
The original story has Thad as chairman with Jeff and David on council all decided before Wes graduated...
Thenchick chapter 4 . 4/26/2014
You forget that they picked a chairman in the last one...
Avalon Callahan chapter 13 . 3/27/2014
I'm really disappointed, Kurt is my favorite character and Wes is in my top too, so I loved this story! It is a pity that you do not like Kurt and thus a sequence is not possible, but I prefer it there than to turn off Kurt villain. I had in any case enjoy reading your first story, and the rest had started well. :)
ronnyangel88 chapter 13 . 3/18/2014
nnnnoooo omg this was getting so good i want to see whats going to happen with finn. i went to see wes do phantom of the opera and kurt in the audience. and that last line in the last chapter who was going to do what. i hope u find inspiration to pick up this story again. loved ever minute of it.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/23/2014 the previous one they had said already that Thad was chairman...
Bluebloodsfan4426 chapter 13 . 2/9/2014
NOOOO! I just wanted to get over the cliffhanger from the last chapter i just started reading these stories and i found this and it was perfect. but ok. i understand
StrainAsylum chapter 3 . 2/3/2014 did those guys get backstage? And they just wandered into dressing rooms until they found a woman's?
StrainAsylum chapter 2 . 2/3/2014
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