|Reviews for Peacocks and Pings|
| Frogie48 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Cute and right to the point!
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Just found this contest today . . . this one was adorable. One of the more realistic text mishaps yet.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Always LOVE LOVE LOVE Alice Jasper stories. I really like the twist that Jacob is her best friend. Funny lines like "When did Jake go from Zimababwe Black to Murica White?" I'm really looking forward to seeing who you are and seeing if I have read some of your other stuff. Thank you
| twi.cute chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
| Daisy Crazy chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Great story! I feel there is more story to tell, so I hope you consider continuing. :)
| Alice chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Kind of funny,that my name is alice..whatever.. this made me squel *-* Love it!
| Heather Grey chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Loved Alice and Jasper! Who wouldn't love a peen pic from the guy you are crushing on ;) Definitely continue.
| Layla chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Funny little fic.
| Sarah v chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
This needs to be longer cause I sure love me a hot jalice.
| southernpur-rica chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Short but really funny and cute.
| Daisy Grace chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
| Shades Of Purple84 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
LOL WOW Nice!
| edwards-sparrow chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
DAME I NEED MORE OF THIS ONCE THE CONTEST IS OVER WITH MORE LEMONY DETAILS PLEASE ;-)
| CullensTwiMistress chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
This was good but too short.
| Debbi84 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
I liked it!