Reviews for Together Forever
irrelevant chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
it was a nice try and i liked the humorous part when Genki fell. just keep on making more stories and try to improve
BlueGreenGrey chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
That was interesting, but it still could have been better work on your humor...
dstrbd child chapter 1 . 1/14/2003
very cute.
Ren and Epsilon chapter 1 . 12/5/2002
Veeeeeeeeeeeeeery interesting. Well, I like it

cya

Alex ;D
inthedarkforever chapter 1 . 11/5/2002
it was ok but you need to work on ur writting a bit more dun worry u will get better with time

keep writting
Kumorimisora i'm too lazy to log in. what a surprise chapter 1 . 11/4/2002
awwwww! this was cute, not bad! *_* i liked it, at least. don't be so quick to hammer yourself! *_*
Ms. Megabyte lover chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
*holding her Mochi plushie* I didn't know you played/watched monster rancher Angel-Blader! COOLIO!

Max: Chhheeeesee!

Genki: Huh?

I just got an idea... A BEYBLADE/MONSTER RANCHER CROSSOVER! MAWHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!

Writer: Hoe?

Dont say that!

Writer: No... why not make it a... MONSTER RANCHER BEYBLADE CARDCAPTORS CROSSOVER!

YEAH!

Both start singing the song, "Dance to the music"
mecha ghost chapter 1 . 8/26/2002
hey don't belittle yourself this is accually pretty good not the best but i have seen a LOT worse
Funky Munkey chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
Well, i think it was pretty good. I dont know why you kept sayin it was so bad. Keep at it!