Oh. Good job, Anko. Very well done. Oh, and Hinata has become so BOLD. But Hiashi's foul clam jamming must be stopped.

Naruto, that was not well done. And wasn't Jiraiya and/or Anko going to help her out some more? Maybe she should just go with Naruto on the training trip. Unless that happened in the background or I forgot it.

Ooh, Hiashi is learning. Excellent.

And Orochimaru clearly doesn't understand how frustratingly difficult medical research is. Even in the Naruto world where biology is...weird.

Sarutobi...giving Hinata to Danzo is the worst idea you've ever had. What happened to the Will of Fire? Why not try something more reasonable first, like pushing her and Naruto together with a few missions or something. Everyone and their mum knows she's sweet on him. If that backfires, Danzo is like the worse-case scenario backup plan.

Hiashi... Isolating Hinata from the positive influences in her life seems like such an obviously bad idea that I almost think you want her to spiral into darkness. I guess you didn't say that they couldn't come visit her, but still. You're not doing a great job with her. Not that you ever had...

Sakura and Sasuke are so damn nosey. I get Naruto is there teammate but that doesn't give them the right to constantly pester him about what he's hiding(especially Sakura)

At first I was questioning why Hinata, when Neji is also there. Like the dude has literal better control, technique, and just over-all everything and they prob won't care if he got the mark instead. (the hyuga I mean coz they got the forehead curse mark and shit) He also was a genius and is literal the strongest hyuga in their gen and would have been someone greater had he not died... Would have been the one who reformed the hyuga clan, and would be a big influential in Konoha Boruto (had he not died for a freaking shipyes I am still salty to this day. probably saltier than the dead sea.)

(my thoughts when I read the summary)

then again this is romance.

Well, it's official. Team Clone 7 is a thing!

you are about to make me fucking murder you of you keep leaving cliff-hangers

Wingman of the year

nice

YES HINATA, BEAT HER UP!

Wtf , no Hinata . XD argghhhh what’s going to happen !

XD I excited to read this .

I literally cried when Sarutobi gave hinata to danzo