Reviews for Failings and Misunderstandings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh balls... Hiruzen, what have you done?! |
![]() ![]() Finally Lee wins in here! |
![]() ![]() When darker side of Hinata approaching |
![]() ![]() ![]() It annoys me every time when I see “for those who are interested...” but if I didn’t see it I would forget that I in fact am interested *awkward laugh* good story btw |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but I just realized that I needed to say this...only a shinobi with jonin level chakra can perform the shadow clone technique Sasuke doing it at 12 is a tad bit unrealistic thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, I hope you continue, greetings, see you, bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() T_T Poor Hanabi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure I agree with Kakashi's training style here. He eliminated Naruto's ability to see, ability to move, rendered him incapable of locating Kakashi via sound, and disallowed the use of the only useful jutsu Naruto possesses (if you can't see something, I'm not sure you can Kawarimi with it, which is the only other technique he has that might apply). Then he tells Naruto to catch him. Kakashi's always been seen explaining or demonstrating new things before they work. Leaving aside that Kakashi has jonin skills and Naruto's a genin, Naruto is left with no method of performing the assigned task. No sensory techniques or anything like that. |
![]() ![]() Just started this and its already one of the most interesting ideas that i have seen in a long time :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, Kaka here letting you know that the next update will not be coming anytime soon. Team Dragon Star has decided as a group it is better for us to break apart and work on our solo projects. Many of us have moved past Fanfiction and for some of us, writing in general. I hope you realise that this had not been an easy choice. The account and all it’s stories will stay up for your enjoyment. I hope you understand. Thank you all for supporting us in these last few years. We never would have reached this point without y |
![]() ![]() another useless goddamn HInanta cunt licking story... you can find a damn story without the over fucking used pairing... it a fan fic not the god forsaken cannon bullshit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rasa wasn't a big deal as Kazekage, he was actually a idiot. The poor handling of Gaara, and the fiasco with Pakura, you don't squander away a S ranked Kunochi like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ninja are legale adults, a 12 year old Genin can enter a brothel just fine lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trying to think of a reason on why Orochi would want the Byakugan. Does he have any more Senju DNA laying around to try to recreate the Rinnegan, or Tensaigen? |