Reviews for Failings and Misunderstandings
Aeonir chapter 35 . 12/11/2014
Is Danzo able to use Kotoamatsukami without restrictions or drawbacks? That's the only way I can think of that he could possibly think he could even feasably get away from this bulltshit without getting ousted as a traitor.
Aeonir chapter 34 . 12/11/2014
The whole Danzo situation really is not so much of a plot hole as it is a giant universe ending plot singularity sucking everything good, worthwile and sensible out of an otherwise really enjoyable fic.
Aeonir chapter 31 . 12/11/2014
Sarutobi needs to die... You don't chuckle about sending someone to Danzo, especially when it's an ally.
Aeonir chapter 30 . 12/11/2014
So Hinata gets a punishment way worse than death, to become one of Danzo's sick experiments at breaking humans and turning them into automatons, while Naruto who did the exact same thing didn't even get reprimanded... Are you fucking serious?!
kitanalao chapter 40 . 12/11/2014
hmm... i do hope hinata stay in konoha since she bore a curse seal... since so far orochimaru tried his best stuck with kimimaro well... hinata is healthy ... why not chose a healthier host to posess... well... i hope everyone is okay... sadly i have to stop now due to a sleep... but i'll be back again. so see you...
kitanalao chapter 39 . 12/11/2014
hmm... hinata change right? well... intriguing event... good job.
kitanalao chapter 38 . 12/10/2014
hmm... nice warm conversation... i love it...
Rakugosha chapter 41 . 12/10/2014
Was actually kinda hoping that Hinata wouldn't be going on the training trip, but this works, too. Looking forward to seeing more of this story, hope you continue it.
kitanalao chapter 37 . 12/10/2014
hahaha... poor naruto. he got freaked out... by the way reading this raise many question : 1. are you planning making itachi pure evil? 2. i wonder danzo now has a grudge toward sandaime and jiraiya now? 3. why resurecting hashirama? i know he is important to tsunade because he is her grand father but i though it would her little brother or dan as tsunade's close person to. by the way intriguing process... i enjoy it...
kitanalao chapter 36 . 12/10/2014
waw... that was unexpected progress... but now hinata has started walk into darkness... good job.. oh yeah i am sorry for a little late review.. i need 5 days to reread 40 chapter before read and review this one... i hope you don't mind...
Guest chapter 30 . 12/10/2014
And i be all like... Oh shizballs...
Veive chapter 41 . 12/10/2014
Great fic, well done.
Unknown2112015 chapter 41 . 12/9/2014
Nice, when the next story coming out? Please tell me that you will be continue this with a part 2 for you were doing a good job with this one.
Guest chapter 41 . 12/8/2014
Hashirama is piiiiiiiised. Go Hinata!
dukeofpoorplanning chapter 41 . 12/8/2014
I read this in about two days, and let me just say that I was really surprised by how much I actually enjoyed it. Spending as much time focusing on their training as you guys did isn't something I've ever seen before, and it was really refreshing to see the main trio changing and growing, but it being handled believably. I found this story just searching for completed NaruHina fics, and while it didn't have what I had thought it would, it far exceeded all of my expectations. A few things that I think could be improved, though, are a lack of consistency and overreliance on character tics. With the former, you guys switch between using Japanese and English for a few terms, and use the western name order a few times, despite the story mostly using Japanese order. As for the other thing, having, for instance, Lee's dialogue ALL focus on youthfulness makes it seem as though that's all there is to him, when really there's a lot more there. The same can be said of a few other characters, whose quirks I think you guys over exaggerated, which ironically made them feel a little flat, at least to me. Also, there are a few technical errors here and there, but the standard in this fic is much higher than I've come to expect, so I really can't complain on that front. I'm really excited to see where you take the sequel; good luck with it!
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