Reviews for Royal Demon
Cameron Reese Slytherin chapter 1 . 4/1
Pretty good idea for a story, but, you need to let everything flow instead of jam-packing it! I mean, it's pretty confusing! You need to explain this better as you can't just do a time skip like that and if you intended on keeping it one chapter, then it should have been longer and more detailed! This story need to be rewritten but i like the Idea though! XD
Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Hehe great lil fic
loleo chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
And again a story with to much frutation and so very short. All is here for a really very good story... and then no much elaboration about the story plot. Bam, bam, bam and... end. No explanations, no why and how all come. I am sad to say, the idea to this story is very good. But - the story itself is very too short and too small. Please, write this story again, write all what is missing... where Harry had lived - how he met Leo and Rhys - how Leo is Remus mate - how Harry know, it is Blaise, who is his second or first mate - how Harry learned to fight with and/or without magic - how he knew Alora - and so on. Please, know, I love your idea. But not the now to reading accomplishment.
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
interesting...and anticlimatic
cool chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
love it
keep up the great work