|Reviews for Beyond the Veil|
| numair2304 chapter 4 . 10/1
I think that the shift in the timeline makes complete sense as in this timeline they still had Appa for transport. Having a flying bison would definetly cut travel time. It's always a problem to me when you read a crossover story, that despite having a new character to alter events, still sticks to closely to the canon. I'm really enjoying this story and liking the changes that have occurred. I'm very interested to see what happens in the future when the truths of Naruto, Gaara, Kurama and Shukaku are revealed.
| meow goes a cat chapter 4 . 6/22
I COMPLETELY agree with you on making it a bit more graphic and realistic, nya. Plz update, nya!~ -
| blue phonix chapter 4 . 5/20
| funnylittlestory chapter 1 . 4/30
Please update. I can wait forever if need be but please please update.
| Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 4 . 4/3
I like your story! Update soon!
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/27
I DONT CARE IF ITS ALMOST BEEN 2 WHOLE YEARS SINCE THIS WAS UPDATED IT IS AMAZING AND NEEDS TO BE CONTINUED OMG I LOVE IT
| Nameless Angel 00 chapter 4 . 2/21
damn azula .
| avidreaded chapter 4 . 2/10
You're never updating this aren't you
| Carcrash87 chapter 4 . 1/28
Plz update I love this it is my first naruto crossover and I love it Plz update:)
| scarlettravencrove chapter 4 . 1/4
Hope you continue !
| godzillafan1 chapter 4 . 12/12/2014
not bad I really like this story please write the next chapter soon.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
For me the story had a lot of points cut because you made Kurama a female but I pushed through I'm wondering if you'll update though, it's been a while.
| NobodyJinx chapter 4 . 8/3/2014
I'm curious as to how the plot will continue I hope you're still working on this story it's awesome
| Allykrau chapter 4 . 6/27/2014
Fufufu loved it :3
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
Heh, I hope Gaara and Naruto kick ass during the drill scene! It'd be fun to read about them fighting azula, mai, and Ty Lee ahaha