Reviews for Trinity
FlightFeathers chapter 17 . 11/30/2014
I have enjoyed this thoroughly. The plot was simple enough, but you made it better. These two to three angsty chapter were written really well. I got emotional as I read Jack's sister's reaction to his death; nothing else breaks my heart like hearing about someone's own flesh and blood die. But the way you described her reaction, and what she said to him, made my heart break. You have a talent. The chapters written before Jack's death were also good; there were moments when I just couldn't stop smiling. Jack's sister was a darling here, and a really good match-maker, I have to say. ;) The Tooth/Jack moments were heart-warming. They are such sweethearts. I hope you will update soon; I just can't wait to see Jack' reaction at seeing Tooth, North, Sandy, and, most especially, Bunnymund. He sure will be speechless when he will see that his pet rabbit was actually a six-feet tall Pooka, who is a master in Tai Chi (couldn't help mentioning that). I also want to see what will become of Pippa - the poor, poor girl. She was so young and lost the only person who understood her the most. :'(
yankeesthis chapter 17 . 11/13/2014
That really good story , I hope you do not leave , this is getting better and better.
kidamerica123 chapter 17 . 11/6/2014
please update this is a great story
Wilona Riva chapter 17 . 9/13/2014
Why, thank you for a wonderful chapter!
falconrukichi chapter 17 . 7/15/2014
Aww! Its ended in cliffhanger! I must say that this story fot their own good plot and really enjoying read it! Please come back and update!
sophiarouse chapter 17 . 7/7/2014
please continue i want more pleaseeeeee
Guest chapter 17 . 7/7/2014
it finished or it will continue. Continue please i want more
sophy chapter 4 . 7/3/2014
I love your story and i love RAINBOW SNOWCONE its my favourite OTP continue
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 17 . 6/30/2014
Oh my goodness awesome chapter awesome job
LoverofJack chapter 17 . 6/25/2014
I believe it took me so long to start reading this chapter! very very angsty , I have seen HTTYD 2 three times it was that good! and can you do a fic on it after this one? please
Book girl fan chapter 17 . 6/14/2014
Tooth is going to be the first to find him! That's going to be a shock.
SilverDragon00 chapter 17 . 6/13/2014
I CANT WAIIITITTTT
Avatarlover123 chapter 17 . 6/13/2014
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Avatarlover123 chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
Oh Gurd !Oh Gurd !My Reaction is below and i really can't wait till next Chapter I'm on The CLIFF! ( & for Once i Don't Like It ) !( HEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPPPP) !
Avatarlover123D chapter 17 . 6/13/2014
My Gurd! ! OH MY GURD! ! At the end he saw Toothina didn't he ? I am pretty sure . Thanks for updating ! I loved the last bit amd the writing was FANTASTIC :D ! A really Marvelous chapter . Can't wait till next chapter :) . And i would log in but im to lazy and its almost Five in the morning. Oh i also wanted to say that it is coming along GREAT. I can just see Jacks reaction when he meets the Guardians and i can picture Tooth being all like oh my Gurd ... Jack ...? Well bye till next time . :D
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