Reviews for Everlasting Bonds: Wings of Despair
chaosalien chapter 43 . 4/6/2016
Even though I knew this story was cancelled I decided to go ahead and read it anyways and I was not disappointed (well besides it won't be finished) I could really tell how much you improved from chapter one to chapter 20 and so on; I like how you change it from most fanfic and made Robin and lucina have Morgan before they even became an item and as much as I want this to continue I know it won't and I understand that what you want comes first! I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed what you have created here and I wish you the best of luck!
Wolfishungry chapter 43 . 6/27/2015
Wow that's an amazing
I know you've been discontinued for a year on Everlasting Bonds but I want to let you know that in 2015 you still have people reading this masterpiece. Although I'm really sad about the end and superrrr curious about what you were planning to do with the plot with Morgan's capture and matchmaking Lucina x Robin, i'm happy to have read this!
WingSlash chapter 43 . 7/21/2014
Just a simple question, what is this other project you are working on?
Aaron chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
Hey, guy?

It's okay, no one minds you putting your own work first. I must say, it's totally to be expected. There's nothing wrong, there. The fact you gave a cancellation notice is a sign that you actually care about your readers, and that's a good thing.
Guest chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
Well this is disappointing. Although I'm not sure I agree with your reasoning (The writing style part) I suppose your own work comes first. It's a shame that all the work you put into this story is all for naught, but I guess good things can't last forever.

Well regardless of what I feel, I think you're a great writer and I wish you nothing but success on your solo project. Good luck on your future endeavors and never stop writing.

Take care!
nightluck chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
Well, it's a shame you won't continue but I will look foward to any of your works because you are an amazing writer :)
squish13 chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
Hey, I know I've already been discussing this with you, but I figure I should say this here too (doubly driving it in).

"Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self." A certain quote by Cyril Connolly, and it's best to remember it!

Keep moving toward your own goals, try your best not to lose yourself to the fans. It can eat away at you and you lose yourself along the way. A lesson I've learned through both writing and lets plays.

So, once again, good luck on all your future endeavors, wherever they may lead :D
afterados chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
As someone who's followed this fic for ages, but never managed to review, I've gotta say a few things.

First of all, while this really stinks for everyone who loved EB (like me!), I just wanna say good luck on your next project! This was a hell of a story, so you I'm not sure you really /need/ luck for your next one, but y' know.

Also, I wanna say thanks for actually having the courage to stand up and tell us that you'd be leaving. I can't count how many people have just left a story hanging there, for whatever reason, and it really shows how much this project meant to you that you're not just leaving your fanbase hanging.

This story was one of my favorite fics on the site, and it's a real shame that this story couldn't be finished... but I think it's the right decision to focus on your other project, and I can't wait to see what you do in the future, whether it's writing for yourself (And when you finish your script, please let us all know what it's called! I know I'd love to read it!), or on FF dot net.

Also, while I can't say that I know the FE fanbase too well, I can only imagine some of the hate-reviews that you'll get over the next few days/weeks, so... stay strong!

Keep up the great work... /wherever/ you write next!

(Oh, PS, is there any way for us to see the outline for the rest of EB? I'd love to see how you were going to end the story!)
Shadow of Darkness 78 chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
I understand and respect your decision to cancel Everlasting Bonds. This was the story that I was awaya hopeing to see in my alerts and I am saddened by your choice. However I understand the Economic reasons all too well. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors and the greatest success in your Orignal Work. I well hopefully see you around Fanfiction.
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Fireminer chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
So, the end is here, huh?

Simply Speechless.
pokemon.rhoades chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
Damn it. I had just discovered this fic and was really enjoying it. Good luck on your next project.
Zallow chapter 43 . 7/19/2014
At least you tell us you are stopping. It's a pity, but nothing can be done I guess.
Thanks to you as well, it was really nice to read this story, especially the beginning, before the shepherds went to Valm. :)
Fireminer chapter 42 . 6/19/2014
Short. Short. And very short.

Wonder how high could Robin in anger without provoke Grima?

And that is a good advice. Writing something new is always a valuable tactic. Good luck!

But send me the detail of your original. I find it quite intriguing.
ShadowSter chapter 42 . 6/19/2014
Yay! A new chapter! :D

This was a very good follow up chapter to what happened in the last chapter, it explained in great amounts of detail of what exactly happened, which is good! That's another thing about EB, lots of details! Seriously, it's refreshing to read someone's story when there are lots of details compared to some other stories on FF. xD

I also like the fact that even though these characters are stated to be strong, they can be overwhelmed by numerous amounts of enemies, which is exactly what happened to Severa and Morgan. Makes the story more believable by making the characters able to be beaten to a certain extent. :D

One last thing, I also really liked how you explained where everyone else was during this. You did start putting the Pegasus Knights out on regular scouting missions sometime that I can't remember. xD But still, you used that to explain where such useful people were at the moment which caused a bit of suspense as we waited for them to arrive on the scene with horses and Manaketes. :D

Once again, another excellent chapter! I'll be looking forward to the next one! :)
ShadowSter chapter 41 . 5/20/2014
I don't why I haven't reviewed your story yet, but I meant to tell you that you've done an awesome job with this story. I've been hooked since Chapter 1! The way you write is stupendous! I love the fact that you do focus on more than just the main pairing of this fanfiction, it separates this story from your typical fanfiction pairing story, which in all honesty, is very good. The interactions between ALL characters is highly appreciated by myself and hopefully many others. But when you do place the main pairing - Robin and Lucina - in the same scene, or for instance had Lucina wondering about Robin, it makes the story even more intriguing.

Truly, I thank you for continuing this story for so long and hope you do finish it eventually! (BUT go as slow or as fast as you want! xD) I could read so many more chapters about this story and never tire of it, this story even got me to start playing Fire Emblem again! Anyways, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the future! I have no complaints for the way this written either, very well done! :D
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