|Reviews for Everlasting Bonds: Wings of Despair|
| Fireminer chapter 38 . 2/24
You know, the first part with Kellam and the last with Basilio makes me think about When Hell Break Loose, Kellam would be the one to say the critical words that will make the Shepherd rises from the ash again. Just like a particular quote in Les Miserables:
"In every revolution, there is a person who will create thunder with his words, and then return into the unknown masses again."
| sunswordred chapter 38 . 2/23
Glad to see you updated!
Very solid chapter; will be interesting to see how the siege of Steiger plays out.
Also, the scene with Kellam at the beginning had me rolling; I've seen interpretations of his uncanny stealth before, but I don't think I've seen it go that far. Well done XD
Other than that, not much for me to comment on. Looking forward to the next update!
| laFia chapter 37 . 2/1
Poor Morgan, I hope she will get over her fear soon. There isn't much I could say here since everything flows smoothly and I can't even pick which one is my favorite scene because I would feel like I'm breaking the story. So excellent chapter, good job! :D
| Fireminer chapter 37 . 1/31
Oh damn! I'm getting lost track of this long story. Maybe it's time for starting from the begining again.
Anyway, quite a great start for a new Lunar Year!
| Shadow of Darkness 78 chapter 37 . 1/31
This chapter turned out Great! It's a shame that Morgon dosent want to do battle anymore however it is also quite natural I would think. Hopefully Robin can show her the benefits.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Fireminer chapter 36 . 12/28/2013
Sleep well, Fight well, but would he Die well?...
Anyway, good chapter as usual.
| laFia chapter 36 . 12/28/2013
Damn, this might be a short chapter but it's certainly an emotional one. Poor, poor Morgan and Lucina.
And now you said there might be a mother/daughter combo in the future, you just know how ro keep your readers on their seats huh? (Or at least maybe it's just me.) I can't wait to see how it would happen, just like I can't wait to see more development between Robin and Lucina. I mean, this looks like a good set up to start get them closer no? Especially once Lucina learns her daughter is hurt as well, motherly instinct might kicked in, injury or no injury. :p
Great chapter! And now I shall off waiting for the next update
| SorinTheTactician chapter 35 . 12/9/2013
My favorite thing about this chapter was personality. Every character you had in this chapter was booming in that department. Cynthia and Inigo... Those two made me laugh quite a bit. And that is in battle. Imagine if you gave them a Chapter outside of it dealing with shenanigans. But I digress.
You said you were worried about character injury as a crutch? Well I understand what you mean but if there aren't injuries, the story loses its realism. Now you don't have to put people in comas but an injury like Nah received here and there and you should be fine.
Nice Chapter. Also I made it through the review without saying it so... Best Chapter Ever. #WaifuBias ...Ignore that.
| Fireminer chapter 35 . 12/9/2013
Never seen anyone depicted Inigo like that. Keep up the good work!
| Shadow of Darkness 78 chapter 35 . 12/8/2013
Great Chapter. That horn could not have happened at a better time. Hopefully Nah makes it to camp before they fall out of the sky.
Looking Forward to your next update.
Shadow of Darkness
| Zallow chapter 35 . 12/8/2013
Good chapter, however, I find it a bit unfair that you will focus your next chapters about the children while you have not really spoke about their parents. It's not because the children are OP in Fire emblem that we should forget their parents :S
But who cares,the children are so cool , right ? :D
In this chapter, I especially like the fact you spoke so much about Inigo, I mean, in game, and in a lot of fanfiction, no one really insist on the fact that he is a good fighter. Everyone just focus on the fact that he flirts a lot with girls. :(
| QuizMasterBlaine chapter 34 . 11/24/2013
Great story so far. I always love well done combat scenes, and yours are certainly some of the better ones I've read on this site. The pacing seems a tad slow, but I won't complain about getting more character building and fight scenes. I really hope you manage to see this story to its conclusion.
| Shadow of Darkness 78 chapter 34 . 11/22/2013
"Lucina!" (Looks at Wyvern rider with pure hatred. Pulls Silver Sword and proceedes to attack the beast with pure hatred)
Anyway Nicely done. Things aren't looking good for Robin, first Moregon and now Lucina. Anyway I look forward to your next update.
Shadow of Darkness 78
| Zallow chapter 34 . 11/22/2013
Ah finally real event between Robin and Lucina ... I mean , you said it was a major Lucina x Robin, but most of the time, it talks about Morgan XD Good chapter ( sucks that Lucina was wounded, Robin you could save her _ ), I wait for the next one !
| Fireminer chapter 34 . 11/22/2013
Well, that's something new with the Kids. And I welcome it!