|Reviews for Once upon a time in Mexico|
| Captain Weirdo chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Leaves me breathlessly wanting more. haha! Your take on this situation very in character. Hope you're able to follow up and let us see how things start to change between them. Sans the difficult other woman, of course. haha!
| startwriting chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Thanks for this beauty. I like it that you (also in your other stories) twist them together in just the other way, just in another direction than we all want it so much. And still, it's a beautiful treat, very well described, very natural and real. Thanks again, I'm a fan.
| Eternal Crush Haver chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Great description of the passion between the two of them, but it left me wanting more. Maybe another encounter?
| Coachsone chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Noticed that it says complete...but sure would love it to continue. Thanks for sharing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Good! Now you had fun I command you to go and finish "The Case of the Returning Revenger"
| tengland2 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Interesting begining to their relationship. Mexico and a drink. Enjoyed it.
| murphycat chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Well iI was really getting into the story and then-crash! I need more details or a chapter 2! Grear descriptions